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Crater Lake Gods Country

God’s country, a volcano who turned herself into a lovely lake of the prettiest color. Azure? No. Periwinkle? Not really. Possibly a lovely blue topaz, yes, this is what we see. Her calm silence greets us, with an awed, reverent countenance, inviting meditation. The only sound is our snowshoes as we walk in disbelief toward the topaz ribbon. She has spooled herself around a miniature island, adorned with her evergreen subjects. Guarded by white helmeted mountains, who gladly do her bidding, especially in winter. Her lovely evergreens encourage her canvas to share her knowing gifts of life. We pay humble reverence to the Almighty’s painted scene in silence, taking it in slowly. Her majesty is so compelling, even the snow feels blue. We pay homage by not talking. I reach for my husband’s hand. He squeezes it, and I look into his all-knowing eyes. Crater Lake, a magical place, created by God Himself, but blessed by the angels. Spirit is in the mountains, and the evergreens. You can feel her without trying. We take photos, knowing they cannot possibly replicate or capture this feeling of awe and reverence. She is an indescribable place, a volcano whom God turned into a lovely lake. Blue topaz majesty, with rhinestone streaks and glitzy diamond-like glimpses of soul. Spirit no doubt takes our picture. Sending it to heaven ahead of us, so they will know us When we arrive. A magical place, Crater Lake. God’s country. Written Jan 7th, 2019 Contest: Sleeping Volcano Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 1/25/2019 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations great Job
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/25/2019 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Bobby May. I do not often try imagery as I am scared to death of the terms imagery, and metaphors, having just learned about them minutes ago. This was a brave poem for me to undertake. I have been holding my breath for awhile hoping it made sense. Now I feel I have been validated. Thank you my friend!
Date: 1/23/2019 8:33:00 PM
Caren, your entry is my favorite! Breathtaking imagery with holy reverence of meditation framed by love. Wow! Into my faves! You captured this lake in all its glory! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving win! I really loved this and think it is one of your best! : ) xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/23/2019 8:36:00 PM
Thank you Connie. It was something I truly felt strongly about, and the more I looked at the photo and tried to talk myself out of trying to write a poem good enough, the more ideas I came up with and bandied about. Thank you so much. I almost did not try as the photo was breathtaking, and showed God at His most elegant artistry.
Date: 1/23/2019 3:29:00 PM
Caren, you have created great imagery and feeling that I was looking for. Thank you so much for entering my contest. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/23/2019 8:37:00 PM
Thank you Eve. I am truly happy it all worked out as sometimes when I try too hard, it does not pay off in the end. This time it did. It was such a breathtaking scene, I felt God's hand and heart there even though I was sorry I myself have never been there.
Date: 1/8/2019 5:37:00 AM
Oh that one should do well in the contest; best of luck. A very pleasant and soothing read.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/8/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thank you M.L. I am expanding myself trying to write more delicate pieces. I am glad you like it. I was trying for soothing and spiritual. The photo that goes with this poem is exquisite if you have peeked at Eve's contest prompt.

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