Cradle My Tears, Moon

The moon's bow beckons to me,
wind's frosty fingers 
entwining mine,
and I lay myself on the balcony's ledge

immersing, losing myself
under that inky blanket sea

the clouds rolling past, so fast,
skimming like waves veiling moonlight,
then letting it peek through
like a shy bride

beautiful, so beautiful
a gentle glow of soul
a silent lullaby that rocks me

If only for a moment
I keep my cradle of tears at bay,
as I let the moon do the weeping for me.


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Debussy's Clair de Lune
now mingles in my mind like soft smoke
and tears come streaming...
Tired, so tired am I.







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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Coulstock Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 6:03 PM
I just read this and found it so emotional and truly beautiful.
Makama Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 7:14 AM
You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great
Ayala Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Oh! How incredibly beautiful - I love the mystical Moon! Kika
Manassian Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 1:19 PM
NIKKO!!! This is so awesome! I'm in love with the moon and you just made her so resplendent with this write. So soothing and beautiful in its sadness. I'm in awe. This isn't the angels with folded wings, though. You gave me the wrong link!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 2:46 PM
This is just exquisite!
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 5:56 PM
returning to this gorgeous one. You should check out the new contest using Peter White's smooth jazz. I'ts a long song so I am still working on mine and it's not very original. But it's lyrics, and generally they are not super original poetry! You would probably come up with something magnificent, Nikko.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Please share this with PFT Nikko. This poem draws the imagination to soar with your imagery!
Manassian Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 3:18 PM
This is so beautiful, Nikko. I love the moon too! You have captured such beauty with your imagery...WOW. Such amazing talent! Hugs
Anish Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Nice ode to the orb! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Chircop Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Tnks for introducing me to sweet Jollibee..bzzzzz : ).That Ronald mcdonald guy took pictures with me and even with my husbsn and I when We were for a holiday in Inverness Scothland..I took the opportunity to have photos taken to take back home with us : ) Now re the poem-This poem moves me and touches my heart in a sad and beautiful way.I was missing you and your poetry sweet lady.
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 6:56 PM
WOW this is how I love to see my sweet Nikko write. Love this one. FAVE
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 4:07 PM
This poem soothes the soul Nikko and leaves me inspired to want to write. A beautiful poem that would seem to go wonderfully with Clair de Lune a favorite of mine.
Richards Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Oh my Nikko.......this one is close to my heart, and so lovely and sad. Do you know, that Clair de Lune was my mother's favorite classical piece, and when I was learning piano, it was a struggle, but I made myself learn it for her. She didn't live long enough to hear me play it, but our granddaughter was named after this piece in honor of my mom. :) This poem speaks to me! ps......I've missed seeing you.....so happy to find this!
Hunter Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 11:39 AM
I agree with Aiyah below...this was moving...and beautiful. I just said it but I'm gonna say it again..I LOVE YOUR WRITES! Faving this one too.
Torres Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 8:02 AM
such a pleasure to read your poem, Niko.. :') ...i was moved with the loneliness it portrays...so beautiful!!! ..^__^ ..oxox..AiyaH :)
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