Clean and Clear

The river remembers when warriors coming to be nourished respected Mother Earth

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 7/9/2009 8:18:00 PM

My Dearest Barbeeg, My Nubbies Wow YOU are such a Wonderful POETESS It seems People on the Soup are feeling the pain Mother Earth has gone through trying to help Mankind did YOU read Deborah Guzzy POEM of ravaging Mother Earth SUPERB Write LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG

James Fraser

Date: 7/7/2009 1:14:00 PM

Wonderful Kimo Barbara, nicely worded>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 7/5/2009 11:50:00 PM

So true BG.Nice work you have a poet's eye for nature.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/5/2009 2:59:00 PM

Very nice, Barbara! You certainly make a great point. I keep waiting for Mother Earth to rebel at the way she is treated these days. But there was a time, as you describe, when Native Americans paid her due respect. Excellent kimo! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/5/2009 7:07:00 AM

How sad that respect for Mother Earth...so precious....has been forsaken. Nicely done, Barbara!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/4/2009 6:19:00 PM

The world needs more of your soulful verse! Barbara! well done!! jim