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Chilly Hours

In the chilly hours of the graying gloaming, silent shivers rise from the estuary. Just before the waves churn in frothy foaming, Goddess Moon approaches Her adversary. Sun slinks away at Her approaching homing, slowly shedding His cloak as Luminary. She reigns all through the darkened and leaden night until stubborn Sun returns, anew and bright.

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Tonye George

Date: 7/18/2024 3:56:00 PM

Sun is indeed stubborn. They all beautifully fight for their reign. Nice one Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/30/2024 6:33:00 AM

Hi Tonye. Thank you for your sweet words. :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/19/2024 12:34:00 PM

Hey Linda, I like your style girl - a really cool write both equally powerful - the moon 'who'reigns all through the darkened and leaden night ...... until the stubborn sun returns anew and bright.' our sun represents, life and warmth, energy and power and the moon symbolizes femininity and associated with emotional depth and intuition. I love this poem Linda, you touched on my favs the moon, sun, and also. the stars for me. An enjoyable read, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/13/2024 3:19:00 PM

So happy to hear you say so dear Jennifer. Nature and science give us ample clues from which to draw. So glad you enjoyed this one! Thank you for your warm words of encouragement! :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/18/2024 12:28:00 PM

Hey Linda…this is some superb penning. A FAV and a vote for a POTD. Pangie xx Pangie xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/18/2024 2:13:00 PM

Many hugs, you. are a sister of my soul, 365 days A year and I love you.Pangie

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/18/2024 1:59:00 PM

You are a dreamsicle Pangie! Thanks for the comments and FAV!! hugs my friend :)