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Eastern dam A vast expanse of Captive water Long grass and reeds Marshy acres where Where the dike’s inadequacy Overflowed The hoarse call of Mating geese On flighty wings Ducks plummeting To a watery landing A gilded Teal A fledgling Heron On awkward limbs A Meadowlark A Whippoorwill Sweet breeze caressing Gentle doe Knee-deep in swamp Gazing intently at Shadowy rider Perched contentedly on Looming horse High on a distant hill Near Moose Jaw, Saskatchewan 1968

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Date: 10/2/2019 3:52:00 PM
'Mel, Nice write. A very fine appreciation of life in the marshy wild. David'
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Date: 7/9/2019 7:18:00 AM
We are fortunate who live in this amazing country. I live in BC but also appreciate the variety of Beauty and vastly different landscapes we have. This is a lovely piece.
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Date: 4/7/2019 5:11:00 PM
Your poem paints a lovely vision Mel. Blessings, Susan
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Mel Gill
Date: 4/7/2019 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. I like the style of those poems of yours that I've read. Watch for my book in July: ALPHA to OMEGA: Snapshots in Time: poems, reflections, inspiration, and Eros. Friesen Press
Date: 4/5/2019 5:37:00 PM
Quite nice.
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Date: 4/4/2019 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your lifetime membership. Your imagery in Snowflakes and this poem is captivating.
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Date: 2/1/2019 7:48:00 AM
I like the movement of this piece, the way it bounces and the use of bird types. My uncle was from Moose Jaw, home of the worlds second biggest moose.
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Mel Gill
Date: 2/1/2019 8:04:00 AM
Thanks, Phil. What's the home of the BIGGEST Moose? Regards, Mel
Date: 2/1/2019 5:46:00 AM
Full of wonderful imagery!
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:26:00 AM
I like your line sweet breeze caressing... wonderful imagery!
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Date: 1/27/2019 4:18:00 AM
Wow wonderful lines
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Mel Gill
Date: 1/27/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thanks so much.
Date: 1/19/2019 11:14:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Mel. I think you have found a nice place to put your feet up and rest. This poem I would have categorized as imagism, as your imagery is wonderful!
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Mel Gill
Date: 1/20/2019 9:43:00 AM
Thanks so much, Caren. Mel
Date: 1/19/2019 5:53:00 PM
Hello Mel Gill, you have painted a beautiful scenery with your words, it made me feel like I was there.
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Mel Gill
Date: 1/19/2019 6:25:00 PM
Thanks for this as well, Darlene
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Mel Gill
Date: 1/19/2019 6:25:00 PM
Thanks for this as well, Darlene

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