Body Map

Sleepless, the body becomes 
a mind map strung out on a bed,
color coded in degrees of pain.
Each movement sends an update,
a glowing patch of deepening red
or a lava line of heat solidifying 
into a poker branding plunge
with a white hot X.

Staying still is only a temporary
reprieve, a lull for nerves to reset
and crank up for the next assault. 
Inhabited space pressurizes 
to send throbs pounding
on the walls of each weary cell
accompanied by waves
of relentless ache.

Thoughts clamber upwards
looking for a way out
but fall back into a dark
gravity, consumed by
that agonizingly slow countdown 
when the next dose of oblivion
can be dribbled out of a pill
which, with any luck, 
should get you through 
until morning creeps across
your bed 
with another installment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/24/2023 5:16:00 AM
There's always a positive to a negative, Paul. Being able to feel pain is better than the alternative.
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