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Bathing In Tranquility

Surrounded by the city fuss where throngs of lonely people live; each day their lives superfluous while trying hard as hopes misgive, and years sift quickly through life’s sieve. A peaceful pace is what I seek away from life’s enduring grind that leaves my weary spirit weak; tranquility I long to find and leave this city noise behind. A walk through quiet forest green while bathing in tranquility, enjoying solitude serene with nature’s calm docility, and elegant gentility. The scent of pine that fills the air invigorating senses well as quiet thoughts lift up in prayer, and peaceful dreams within me dwell while nature’s calm my thoughts compel. The freshness of the forest breeze, the calming sound of forest rill, tranquility these moments seize. I’ll walk this fern lined path until my mind is cleared and dreams fulfilled. December 8, 2019

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Date: 12/26/2019 5:21:00 PM
John back again to congratulate you on a beautiful win!;)
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/26/2019 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda.
Date: 12/26/2019 3:53:00 PM
This is a beautiful write, congrats John on a fine win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/26/2019 4:06:00 PM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest.
Date: 12/12/2019 4:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem, John. I do understand the desire to leave the city. I did it and I adore life with flowers, tress in back that grow oranges. Pine trees here galore. Sweet bunnies all over the place. I won't even get near a big city again.. I bring pine bough in. Wow, they smell good. Merry Christmas and Happy Hanukkah,too Panagiota xxx
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/12/2019 10:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for your thoughts and comments, Panagiota, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 12/11/2019 3:50:00 AM
John what s beautiful win!;)
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/12/2019 4:27:00 AM
Thank you, Bren! Hugs, John
Date: 12/10/2019 9:51:00 PM
Shades of Walden Pond! Superb, John! Congrats to you. Season's best, Gershon
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/10/2019 10:04:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon, I appreciate it. Happy holidays. John
Date: 12/8/2019 7:12:00 PM
I am so thankful that I live in the Country. I am able to Embrace the Beauty of Nature. We should all take a moment to reflect- if we are in the city or not. This is so soft, serene and peaceful. Simply beautiful my dear friend. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/8/2019 7:51:00 PM
There are many advantages to living in the city but sometimes we wish to escape the rat race. I appreciate your thoughts and support, Brandy, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Date: 12/8/2019 1:52:00 PM
you carry us rhythmically along your peaceful journey....beautifully crafted write John :) hugs
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/8/2019 7:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandy, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Date: 12/8/2019 1:47:00 PM
Your title drew me in and I was thoroughly satisfied, what a dreamy tranquil write, John, just what the doctor ordered!
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/8/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thanks, John, glad you enjoyed my tranquil thoughts. John
Date: 12/8/2019 1:45:00 PM
Hello John Gondolf, oh such a lovely poem. I felt like i was on that nature walk with you. Enjoyed this poem. Merry Christmas. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/11/2019 12:46:00 PM
Hello John Gondolf, I wish you Merry Christmas.I enjoyed the journey with you.through nature John. Have a nice day my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/8/2019 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene, I’m glad you could join me on my walk through nature. Merry Christmas to you my friend. Hugs, John
Date: 12/8/2019 11:38:00 AM
Your Quintain verses are calming, John. Your fourth verse soothed my senses. A well crafted poem.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/8/2019 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Lin, I’m glad you enjoyed my Quintain. Hugs, John

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