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Baseball Hat Nursery Rhyme

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a baseball hat Damian found, it was lying on the school ground he knew who left the hat when playing with his cat dark brown it was, a logo crowned. someone being careless - Damian frowned, children shouldn't leave things around... Brother Ashwin left the hat while playing tag with the cat... soon the silly boy would feel sad and down ! in the closet Damian hid the cap Ashwin woke up after a short nap he felt sorry indeed no doubt bit glum about it mound of surprise waiting for lucky chap !!!! April 15, 2022 For Nursery Rhyme 3 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Required words used: around, found, ground, brown, down, frowned, crowned, mound

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/5/2022 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Have a blessed day............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/3/2022 4:23:00 AM

Great illustration of the event in a beautiful nursery rhyme. Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/3/2022 6:08:00 AM

Thanks, Chris. These two cute characters are my two grandsons. Fun to watch them!

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/3/2022 4:19:00 AM

This is sweet!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/3/2022 6:07:00 AM

Thanks, Swetha. My two grandsons inspired me.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/2/2022 6:56:00 PM

I love your story, Malabika. Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/3/2022 6:06:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. Those two characters are my two grandsons. Love writing nursery rhymes!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/28/2022 5:26:00 PM

This nursery rhyme was so cute Mala. I think Eve will enjoy it. Blessings xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2022 5:41:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Writing nursery rhymes is fun - I never thought I will be able to. Using the required words was not easy!

Valsa George

Date: 4/24/2022 7:58:00 PM

This is a lovely nursery rhyme where all characters are children on a theme very likely to happen when they play . The sweet rhythm and the endearing tone of the poem makes it an interesting read both for children and adults ! Well done Mala.... ! All the Best in the contest...

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2022 5:40:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. The two characters are my two grandsons - the wise and responsible older one, and the mischievous, but cute younger one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2022 10:03:00 AM

Cute nursery rhyme, Mala!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/16/2022 11:06:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I love writing for, and about children.

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/16/2022 6:43:00 AM

Such a cute nursery rhymes. I like the way you include your 2 brilliant grandsons in this write. All the best in the contest. ^JCB

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/16/2022 6:54:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Friend! It was fun, but not easy to use those required words.

Deb M

Date: 4/15/2022 7:48:00 PM

Well done Malabika…..you did a great job getting all those words in and writing a very sweet poem. Enjoyed! Debx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/16/2022 6:55:00 AM

Thank you, Deb. I have to admit - it was not easy to use those required words - still it was fun writing for children.