Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Limerick

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Baseball Hat Nursery Rhyme

a baseball hat Damian found, 
                             it was lying on the school ground
                                   he knew who left the hat
                                   when playing with his cat
                             dark brown it was, a logo crowned. 

                       someone being careless - Damian frowned, 
                          children shouldn't leave things around... 
                                   Brother Ashwin left the hat
                                 while playing tag with the cat...
                         soon the silly boy would feel sad and down !

                             in the closet Damian hid the cap 
                            Ashwin woke up after a short nap
                                   he felt sorry indeed
                                 no doubt bit glum about it
                       mound of surprise waiting for lucky chap !!!!
                                      

                                          April 15, 2022
                           For Nursery Rhyme 3 Poetry Contest
                                       Sponsor: Eve Roper
 Required words used: around, found, ground, brown, down, frowned, crowned, mound

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Paula Goldsmith May 5, 2022 at 12:39 PM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Have a blessed day............

Christuraj Alex May 3, 2022 at 4:23 AM Great illustration of the event in a beautiful nursery rhyme. Congratulations! Malabika Ray Choudhury May 3, 2022 at 6:08 AM Thanks, Chris. These two cute characters are my two grandsons. Fun to watch them!

Swetha Vangaveti May 3, 2022 at 4:19 AM This is sweet!! Malabika Ray Choudhury May 3, 2022 at 6:07 AM Thanks, Swetha. My two grandsons inspired me.

Eve Roper May 2, 2022 at 6:56 PM I love your story, Malabika. Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend Malabika Ray Choudhury May 3, 2022 at 6:06 AM Thanks, Eve. Those two characters are my two grandsons. Love writing nursery rhymes!

Connie Marcum Wong April 28, 2022 at 5:26 PM This nursery rhyme was so cute Mala. I think Eve will enjoy it. Blessings xxoo Malabika Ray Choudhury April 28, 2022 at 5:41 PM Thank you, Connie. Writing nursery rhymes is fun - I never thought I will be able to. Using the required words was not easy!

Valsa George April 24, 2022 at 7:58 PM This is a lovely nursery rhyme where all characters are children on a theme very likely to happen when they play . The sweet rhythm and the endearing tone of the poem makes it an interesting read both for children and adults ! Well done Mala.... ! All the Best in the contest... Malabika Ray Choudhury April 28, 2022 at 5:40 PM Thank you, Valsa. The two characters are my two grandsons - the wise and responsible older one, and the mischievous, but cute younger one.

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2022 at 10:03 AM Cute nursery rhyme, Mala!! Malabika Ray Choudhury April 16, 2022 at 11:06 AM Thanks, Andrea. I love writing for, and about children.

JC Brul April 16, 2022 at 6:43 AM Such a cute nursery rhymes. I like the way you include your 2 brilliant grandsons in this write. All the best in the contest. ^JCB Malabika Ray Choudhury April 16, 2022 at 6:54 AM Thank you, Dear Friend! It was fun, but not easy to use those required words.

Deb M April 15, 2022 at 7:48 PM Well done Malabika…..you did a great job getting all those words in and writing a very sweet poem. Enjoyed! Debx Malabika Ray Choudhury April 16, 2022 at 6:55 AM Thank you, Deb. I have to admit - it was not easy to use those required words - still it was fun writing for children.