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Autumn Sky

See the autumn sky With heaps of white fluffy wool To weave winter rugs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/10/2022 8:01:00 PM
Picture perfect Haiku. I like the way you mesh one season to another with the image of "white fluffy wool" - seasonal clouds that blow through time. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 12/23/2021 1:53:00 AM
Reminds me of Hamlet watching the cloud. Greetings, my friend.
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Date: 12/22/2021 8:10:00 PM
I love how you described the clouds as wool. Very nice. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 12/22/2021 10:42:00 AM
Cute... very cute... Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/22/2021 8:57:00 AM
Splendid metaphors succinctly woven in fabric of your words. Well done my friend.
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