Apotheosis of a Lover -Erotica

It is the scent of you, that breathes in me.
It is the music when you laugh
that chants across the apse
between our heartwalls,
signaling desire, tossing off forever
thoughts of penitence and shame.
It is the holiday of you
that sings in me.

My eyes need not fulfill the longing in me;
memory alone creates the picture of black hair 
in counterpoint to your brown visage, showing
love that mystics know,
and glowing with an eastern light
from eyes that tell instead of see
and still withhold the quintessential mystery 
of you.

So it is that with a rapture
I may part your thighs.
and dream inside a newer form
of dreaming; you present me
with a prototype of lust 
to celebrate divine intent.
I may harden, knowing
that the juncture of your power
to seek the world becomes
my universe at home--my refuge
in a cannonade of fury
at relentless flesh turned back.

Yet not forever will it yield,
for in its place your own sweet cavern
makes surrender, victory"
my pounding, cadence to the song
of sacred violence that ages beg.
The voiceless thunder of our kiss
is just an echo to our cries of welcome
to the second death
to rival paradise.

Inside your body I release
the restless children of my love,
bursting into you to claim a prize
they cannot understand, their dying
glorious in fulfillment.

Ride with me, my love,
inside the chariot of sweetness;
madness is our quest
above the fiery wheels--
the moment of the flood 
our own eternity!
      ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/6/2014 1:53:00 PM
You really moved the reader along well to the climax of this write. You have a unique and interesting way of evoking the thrill of union. I like the stanza before the last two...the cadence. It is a sweet song that you obviously sing well. Lovely write.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/6/2014 2:18:00 PM
CRAPPY....THEY MOST CERTAINLY ARE NOT! I have gone to your best poems link and found your work to be of high caliber. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Robert Ludden
Date: 5/6/2014 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen. This is the poem I am most proud of...the shimmering (not shining, yet) star of all my mostly crappy writes.
Date: 7/19/2012 4:09:00 PM
no probs following your train of thought this time! :-) that second to last stanza, wow, I actually think it would wrap the poem up then and there, and the last stanza may not be needed...debbie said something similar about your other erotic poem but I disagreed with her then, I think the last stanza WAS needed in that one...in actual fact, this one works either way, with or without that last stanza - it's one scorching poem, that's for sure, and now I'm the one all hot and bothered lol
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/19/2012 4:43:00 PM
Thanks, Charlotte. Of all my erotica, this is the one I like the best, so this time I will be partial to it. I knd of agree with you about the final stanza, but if I change it eventually, I think it would work. I think the poem sounds incomplete without something there. It's always great to arouse my readers. :-)
Date: 7/19/2012 8:52:00 AM
‡ Awesome, The Burning Passion Igniting The Corners Of This Wine Drenched In Desires & Lust's Poetic Canvas, My Dear Sweet Robert * Yesss, Most Assuredly Your Quill Be Blessed As Your Heart Is Wanton *.* Howling At The Midnight Moon & Screaming As A Wild Banshee Seeking Her Wayward Lover ... Smile, Just Kidding ? We Do Seem To Have These Inbred Characteristics Of Both Night & Day; Soft Fragrant Petals One Moment & Then, Crimson Red Kisses As Fiiiiirrrreeee, My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/19/2012 8:56:00 AM
Thank you!