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Angels fall at your feet ... - To savor the tang of truth - to kiss Heaven's visage And sate horrid hearts, they feign you - Immaculate ... - To tend the scars of id, vacant, fallow and dry Such sacred sacrilege, they revile you - Torrid ... - Born of a godly fervor - white flames to ashes Ashes to tears, entranced, they covet you - Righteous. Angels fall at your feet ... - To twist the spine of mercy, to advocate time's curse Brought forth in floods, they employ you - Banal ... - To fawn at fear's reprieves, to shred the Eden leaves Stark and cloistered, coy, they encircle you - Sullen ... - To pierce the side of virtue, to thrust a spear of verity And taste its salty tip - they adorn you - Naked. Angels fall at your feet ... - To strain a tear in symmetry, pure algebraic forms Hot breath and whispers, they laud you - Redeemed ... - To Hell and back, abandon, a sultry paragon's allure Off the cliff, a fall sublime, they become you - Oblivion ... - I am broken, replete ... rusting in your yard, seraphic junk Pawned by Heaven's deceit, to fall rapt at your feet - Rapt ... And so tenderly ... at your feet. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "My Favorite Junkyard" Poetry Contest, Craig Cornish, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 11/13/2019 6:51:00 PM
Another majestic write G, you are on your own island thanks for bringing us to shore! Congrats on another win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 8:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much, John, always so appreciated! :o)
Date: 11/2/2019 9:05:00 PM
As simply as I can say......JUST WOW!!! Lonna
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:19:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Lonna, that's very sweet of you, Dear Poet! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 11/2/2019 7:54:00 PM
Greg, a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win in My Favorite Junkyard. Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:18:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Eve, as always - I am thankful for your friendship and comments! Blessings to you! :o) <3
Date: 11/2/2019 4:21:00 PM
beautiful penning Greg....your pieces are always well crafted but i love this one :) hugs
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:18:00 PM
Oh, you are always very kind, Sandra, and I so value your opinion ... thank you and bless you for your kind comments, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 11/2/2019 4:00:00 PM
Great poem as always sweet Greg, congrats! X:)-luloo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:16:00 PM
Thank you so very much, LuLoo, that's very sweet of you ... blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 11/2/2019 1:33:00 PM
Once again, inspired writing from your magic pen Greg.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:16:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly, Craig, your comments and my placement are very much valued and appreciated. Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 10/31/2019 10:55:00 AM
Love the emphasis...and so tenderly at your feet! And how apt...to twist the spine of mercy...wow!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:13:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Kim - so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 10/31/2019 6:36:00 AM
You have such a uniqueness about your poems, my friend. I knew who the writer was before I looked. Your work is impeccable.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:12:00 PM
You are very kind, Caren, and I thank you so much for the wonderful comments! Blessings! :o) <3

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