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Written February 25, 2023, Poetry/Abecedarian/Ache

Copyright Protected, ID 02-1527-883-25
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France 

Written for the International Contest, A Forms and Words Challenge 
(word chosen ache) sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 03/02/2023, First Place

Published in PoetrySoup's 2023 Anthology, Reflections on the Important Things

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"Grief is the price we pay for love. " Queen Elizabeth II
Ache, ache, aching is my soul for those whose, breathing pulse is no more; coffin closed their bones decay to dust, death, oh death you are a thief that comes creeping. Each night my memories drift, drift, and my fathomless tears could fill oceans; grief is a dark cloak I wear, help me Lord to let go of this sorrow. Inside me it dwells always, always, just last night spirits visited me while I slept; kissing my hair and whispering softly, Lord, I am weeping, weeping. My beautiful, my beautiful loved ones I miss you so, nothing leaves ... for not a single memory do I forget; oh, my heart is broken and shattered, yet I put on a mask of happiness and go about my day. Quietly, I fill my days with art and writing words in forms, resting the ache inside of me for awhile; six feet under, six feet under, rest in peace I murmur, till death unites us in Heaven. Until we stand hand to hand in the Lord's temple, visions and hallucinations come to me in the night; and with fingers weary ... I write, write and do my art, xenophobia is a fear I hold for losing people. Yet, to let go of this grief means that all is gone beyond; and zephyr winds will blow away the love forever.

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Date: 3/4/2023 7:09:00 AM
I love everything about this Constance. I see why Lasaad placed this so high. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/4/2023 9:24:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the nice comment, compliment, and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/3/2023 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative yet sad write/picture. The quote is so very true. My quote: "Love has a huge price tag." Here is a hug for you. My quote: "Only when you have been hurt can you feel another's pain." Have a wonderful day......................
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Date: 3/3/2023 8:48:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and my poem and the compliment on the quote. I love your quote, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/2/2023 10:15:00 AM
Constance, outstanding work, and many compliments on your win in my Writing Challenge - A Words and Forms. I really like your picture and quote as well. Blessings.
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Date: 3/2/2023 1:03:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest, and for the compliment on my poem and placement, blessing, Constance
Date: 2/27/2023 9:01:00 PM
UNIQUE Composition to win the heart of reader. Love.
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Date: 2/28/2023 6:33:00 AM
Anisha, thank your so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/26/2023 5:34:00 AM
Your ache seeps through this exceptional poem, Constance, the way it flows is extraordinary:)
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Date: 2/26/2023 1:45:00 PM
Jo, thank you so much for the visit and comment, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/25/2023 6:40:00 PM
a lot of sorrow, may be love will come back, upsetting poem, and wonderful, "bravo" yann
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Date: 2/26/2023 1:47:00 PM
Yan, thank you so much for the visit comment, and compliment. Yes, I carry a lot of sorrow that I seem unable to let go of, so I write it, blessings, Constance

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