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A Mole On Upper Lip-H

Dress up now boy and girl, It’s time for bonfire joy Bring your purse bring smile line up now for fun Many costumes many shades walking in the haze Sounds of drumming and of horn fletching reborn. Kids wander in the dark, go from house to house And the adults partying the night away somewhere A girl extended her hand; we took a walk on the lake Saw an old house not lived in for many years. We had it all the house, nothing could stop us now A whisper went around a small town, tummy round The girl searched for who gifted her with a child. As we were all in masks and outrageous costumes I could detect her because of a mole on upper lip, Love story goes on, my son to step into my shoes. ======================================== Honorable Mention in Contest: Love Story sponsored by frank herrera

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Date: 6/18/2014 10:43:00 PM
Dr. Ram What an interesting and creative love story. Very unique and captivating. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Path Of Hate poem.
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Date: 12/4/2010 6:48:00 AM
That's deep a little scary a lil freaky
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Date: 11/12/2010 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM for love story contest. This one's a little spooky rather mysterious , the reader could be confused questioning : are they stories? or a story? I liked it , leaves you guessing. Regards, Rinki
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:52:00 AM
Dr Mehta I really liked this poem --a flow in it -rhythm in it,. yes the truth of life cycle ..."my son to step into my shoes" ('m reading one by one I am new here) Krishna Baalu
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Date: 11/8/2010 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning write in Frank's Love Story Contest Dr.Ram. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 9:38:00 AM
a winsome offering that truly deserves a citation, dr ram.. special congrats with a bang!
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:52:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your HM in the Love Story contest with this brilliant and wonderful write and win today.. enjoy another special honor all your own my friend with lots of luv... happy festivities..
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:04:00 AM
Thought this was one of the best I read my friend...Congrats on your success in contest...Michael
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Date: 11/8/2010 4:55:00 AM
Many congratulations Dr. mehta for this super win.
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Date: 11/5/2010 6:22:00 PM
DO NOT ADMIT TO THIS BEING TRUE! john
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Date: 10/30/2010 7:54:00 AM
oh wow-- this was sure unexpected, but I really enjoyed your love story, Dr. Ram! Wow, how very interesting :) I wish you the best in Frank's contest :)-- Happy Halloween :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/29/2010 9:59:00 AM
Hey, is this TRUE story of how you met your love (for Frank's contest), Dr.Ram? IT's so halloweenish! And not what I'd expect of you. Sounds like it was very spur of the moment!! Do tell! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/28/2010 11:36:00 AM
This is a cute love story. Good luck on the contest. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/28/2010 10:46:00 AM
A love story with a twist Dr. Ram ;) love it, all the best for the contest ~ Wilma
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Date: 10/28/2010 8:27:00 AM
Beautifully written love the little twists within that keep the poems story going and full of surprises... Thanks for your welcome views and thoughts on my writng today!
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Date: 10/27/2010 2:27:00 PM
Beautifuly wriiten my fine poet friend
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:21:00 AM
Fine,dear mehta.Great presentation.Mole is a good identity.fabiyas
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Date: 10/27/2010 5:34:00 AM
Even though I am confused, I enjoyed reading your work here. I am at a lost for words on this one, as it is filled with mystery.
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Date: 10/27/2010 4:18:00 AM
Interesting story in this one, Dr. Ram...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/26/2010 11:55:00 PM
excellent rendering here, enjoyed this Dr Ram. Harry
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:40:00 PM
This is a clever tale. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Thanks, too, for your kind words to me. Steve
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:37:00 PM
Interesting tale. Thank you for my 6th place win in your contest. I enjoyed trying out the new to me form, Kyrielle. Thank you. Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 11:48:00 AM
good write... interesting story!! I like the twist ending! You are talented. I am glad you got my cassanova poem.
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:25:00 AM
A really interesting story you have penned here, Dr. Ram. Really enjoyed reading this and loved your last two lines. Wonderful entry for Frank's contest! Hugs, Emilia
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:25:00 AM
soupmail:)
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