A Lovely Wither

As my last leaves bid farewell
and crumble under winter's foot,
or await the soggy slosh of spring ~
I shiver, and raise my naked limbs
up toward where young boys climbed
          toward Heaven...
So long ago, that now, they wither too.

The sweet sap of my youth
      no longer runs,
The osmosis of my roots,
no longer suckles Mother Earth.

An arborist's blades, like the Reaper's scythe
        will sever life's ties,
but, weep not at my ends for
now I climb to Heaven's breast
and a sapling grows from whence I came...
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Sambourne Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 8:28 AM
The "s" alliteration throughout your fine poem is so well woven into its meaning. There is a withering away which requires our acceptance and understanding. A sapling does indeed grow from ash. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes.
Cornish Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Honored Brian - thanks so much!
Woods Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 4:41 AM
Wow that's gorgeous. Full of truth and hope. Xo
Cornish Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Dear Crystal!
Empress Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 10:36 PM
Dear craigsz, this makes me so sad the ending especially, as this poem depicts time and age and stage of life and how one is ready to reach the heaven's embrace where they could reunite with so many long gone. And your use of words for this poem and how youve uses metaphors etc gives an evocative touch as always which i find in your poems, so heartfelt and soul stirring! Pleasure reading this gem. Sending you light always
Cornish Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 8:44 AM
Inky thank you for your always thoughtful comment!
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Wonderful poem. I can so relate to it these days.
Cornish Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Thanks so much AD.
Parker Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 8:19 PM
A metaphor perhaps...or just a tree poem. Very nice. :o))
Parker Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 10:25 PM
Indeed. Cerebral ownership passes along.
Cornish Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Thanks Arlo, perhaps both or more - after a poem is written it becomes, as Bob Ross might say, yours to interpret!
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