A Love Poem

If my love we must part
   Let us part under shroud of night
Who I ask is afraid of the dark?
  Tiss I who fears the darkness when you depart
Times passing shall never lessen the pain within
  I suffer so, longing for your poetry
Until
  Until one day I dream of you
We are bound together, by words and prose
  Desires bring back memories long faded
Final notice, seems so harsh
  Your note of departure, a rupture 
A love poem to say a whispered goodbye
  I shall cherish the laughter and the pain
Declarations of unity made in passions heat
  Alone in your satin sheets, do I weep
Delicate verses of our devotions
  I sing and rhyme them, lost in my own illusions
Moments like this, I loiter in my solitude
  Memories seeking comfort in your soft embrace
Eyes, oh how they burned into my soul
  Eyes that used to kiss my very heart
Poetry shall never lay claim to the depths
  Of our infernally burning passions
Forget me nots grow, in my forgotten garden
  Forgetting is killing me so
Sublime and grey are many a mundane day  
  I wither and fade, for its moments like this
So close to heaven, so close to a burning hell
  I have sailed the seas of desire, only to sink
My sunken footsteps lie below
  My broken heart

Notes:

I happened upon a poet here, T.Nicole Williams, and below is a list of the poems she
 has posted here. Something just clicked and I said wow, even her poem titles are a
 poem!!! After reading a few of her poems, I quite enjoyed her style and expression, 
and thus, I wrote a poem based on all her poem titles! I quite enjoyed this, as the idea
 was so random and by chance, so I hope you all like this poem, as well as I hope
she is flattered to have inspired this little piece!!!

T.Nicole Williams  Poems

A Love Poem 
If We Must Part 
Whose Afraid of the Dark 
Time's Passing 
Until 
Bound Together 
Final Notice 
A Love Poem 
Declaration 
Delicate Verses 
Moments like This 
Eyes 
Poetry 
Forget me nots 
Sublime 
So Close 
Sunken Footsteps
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 6:32 AM
Very creative indeed....enjoyed reading this poem of yours...truly talented!
Vaso Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Thanks for you kind words!!
Called Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 2:07 PM
"A love poem to say a whispered goodbye"- very touching line. Enjoy reading your work!
Vaso Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:52 AM
Much appreciated
Lindley Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 7:24 AM
An Inspiration set to heart my friend. A truly wonderful write!!!! BBBBRAVO!!!!!!
Vaso Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:52 AM
Thanks Robert, very kind of you!
Williams Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Arthur, I love this piece beyond words. I am honored that you liked my writings! You took the concept of each one and made it into a spectacular poem. You are talented and highly creative! Last but not least....thank You! Nicole
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Well thank you kindly, nothing is more pleasing than to know the effort was appreciated, and by effort, I mean this was fun to do!!!!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Love this piece arthur! will check out T.Nicole Williams... Keith :-)
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:28 PM
Thanks Keith, much appreciated!!
Emp Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 9:58 AM
Wow, this is wonderful though it appears to be sad and lonely but the love and passion has been strong enough that you can feel it in every words. Truly you're a great writer. I guess the poet itself will be amazed at your work.
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:27 PM
Thanks so much Lena, I am the expert on sad and dark!! and thanks so much for your very very kind words!
Smith Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 2:42 PM
Simply marvelous..She will be impressed
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Thanks Tim, I sure hope so!!
Nance Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Brilliant!! what a spectacular thing to do. :)
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Hi there Casarah, thanks, and yes I did enjoy doing this one!
Carrillo Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 11:39 AM
A great poem Arthur; as I was reading - I knew it had to do something with her poetry. Thanks for sharing. ... Lucilla
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Hello Lucilla, glad you dropped by!! :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 4:45 AM
you and R. Lamoureux (sorry if i misspelled it) :O?! are a wow!!! He made a mosaic for Toquyen and i really love it and so this one.. :) i love these three lines: delicate verses, sunken footsteps and forget me nots.. :D will try to go with these.. :) im thrilled what's in this.. :)
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Thanks so much Olive, I will read Richards, he is very very very talented!!!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 4:46 AM
i remember your links buddy Art.. :D :P
Rivenbark Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 3:46 AM
Stunning, what a wonderful and fitting dedication.
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 3:07 PM
Thank you so much A.E. !!!
Allison Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 2:32 AM
This is a beautifully written and very clever tribute Arthur. I do hope she gets to see the poem I am sure she will love it. hugs Jan xxx
Allison Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 2:37 AM
You are welcome to browse my titles and do the same for me - I would love to see 'fun and games with a banana', 'hellllppppppp I've lost my knickers' and 'beware of miss yo-yo knickers' woven into a poem lol. Hugs Jan xx
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