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A Love Poem

If my love we must part Let us part under shroud of night Who I ask is afraid of the dark? Tiss I who fears the darkness when you depart Times passing shall never lessen the pain within I suffer so, longing for your poetry Until Until one day I dream of you We are bound together, by words and prose Desires bring back memories long faded Final notice, seems so harsh Your note of departure, a rupture A love poem to say a whispered goodbye I shall cherish the laughter and the pain Declarations of unity made in passions heat Alone in your satin sheets, do I weep Delicate verses of our devotions I sing and rhyme them, lost in my own illusions Moments like this, I loiter in my solitude Memories seeking comfort in your soft embrace Eyes, oh how they burned into my soul Eyes that used to kiss my very heart Poetry shall never lay claim to the depths Of our infernally burning passions Forget me nots grow, in my forgotten garden Forgetting is killing me so Sublime and grey are many a mundane day I wither and fade, for its moments like this So close to heaven, so close to a burning hell I have sailed the seas of desire, only to sink My sunken footsteps lie below My broken heart Notes: I happened upon a poet here, T.Nicole Williams, and below is a list of the poems she has posted here. Something just clicked and I said wow, even her poem titles are a poem!!! After reading a few of her poems, I quite enjoyed her style and expression, and thus, I wrote a poem based on all her poem titles! I quite enjoyed this, as the idea was so random and by chance, so I hope you all like this poem, as well as I hope she is flattered to have inspired this little piece!!! T.Nicole Williams Poems A Love Poem If We Must Part Whose Afraid of the Dark Time's Passing Until Bound Together Final Notice A Love Poem Declaration Delicate Verses Moments like This Eyes Poetry Forget me nots Sublime So Close Sunken Footsteps

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Date: 2/3/2016 10:33:00 AM
Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7
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Date: 6/7/2014 6:32:00 AM
Very creative indeed....enjoyed reading this poem of yours...truly talented!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/7/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thanks for you kind words!!
Date: 6/6/2014 2:07:00 PM
"A love poem to say a whispered goodbye"- very touching line. Enjoy reading your work!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/7/2014 10:52:00 AM
Much appreciated
Date: 6/5/2014 7:24:00 AM
An Inspiration set to heart my friend. A truly wonderful write!!!! BBBBRAVO!!!!!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/7/2014 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Robert, very kind of you!
Date: 6/3/2014 3:05:00 PM
Arthur, I love this piece beyond words. I am honored that you liked my writings! You took the concept of each one and made it into a spectacular poem. You are talented and highly creative! Last but not least....thank You! Nicole
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 5:30:00 PM
Well thank you kindly, nothing is more pleasing than to know the effort was appreciated, and by effort, I mean this was fun to do!!!!
Date: 6/3/2014 11:14:00 AM
Love this piece arthur! will check out T.Nicole Williams... Keith :-)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 5:28:00 PM
Thanks Keith, much appreciated!!
Date: 6/3/2014 9:58:00 AM
Wow, this is wonderful though it appears to be sad and lonely but the love and passion has been strong enough that you can feel it in every words. Truly you're a great writer. I guess the poet itself will be amazed at your work.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 5:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Lena, I am the expert on sad and dark!! and thanks so much for your very very kind words!
Date: 6/2/2014 2:42:00 PM
Simply marvelous..She will be impressed
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 3:12:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I sure hope so!!
Date: 6/2/2014 1:00:00 PM
Brilliant!! what a spectacular thing to do. :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 3:11:00 PM
Hi there Casarah, thanks, and yes I did enjoy doing this one!
Date: 6/2/2014 11:39:00 AM
A great poem Arthur; as I was reading - I knew it had to do something with her poetry. Thanks for sharing. ... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 3:11:00 PM
Hello Lucilla, glad you dropped by!! :)
Date: 6/2/2014 8:32:00 AM
You have written an inspired piece Arthur, bravo!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 3:10:00 PM
Thanks Richard, whats the title of the poem that Olive mentions? I would like to read it! ( see below )
Date: 6/2/2014 4:45:00 AM
you and R. Lamoureux (sorry if i misspelled it) :O?! are a wow!!! He made a mosaic for Toquyen and i really love it and so this one.. :) i love these three lines: delicate verses, sunken footsteps and forget me nots.. :D will try to go with these.. :) im thrilled what's in this.. :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 3:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Olive, I will read Richards, he is very very very talented!!!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/2/2014 4:46:00 AM
i remember your links buddy Art.. :D :P
Date: 6/2/2014 3:46:00 AM
Stunning, what a wonderful and fitting dedication.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 3:07:00 PM
Thank you so much A.E. !!!
Date: 6/2/2014 2:32:00 AM
This is a beautifully written and very clever tribute Arthur. I do hope she gets to see the poem I am sure she will love it. hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2014 2:37:00 AM
You are welcome to browse my titles and do the same for me - I would love to see 'fun and games with a banana', 'hellllppppppp I've lost my knickers' and 'beware of miss yo-yo knickers' woven into a poem lol. Hugs Jan xx

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