A Grey Fall Morning

Waking on this grey fall morning;
in the air there lies a warning;
rising angst as fears aborning; 
feeling late November’s chill.
Darkened clouds obscure the daybreak, 
as I nurse this aging headache;
warmer days are but a keepsake
gone forever, summer’s thrill.

Thinking back as springtime’s grooming
brought me hope with nature’s blooming;
summer’s warmth left me assuming
that forever youth would last.
Suddenly there came September
causing bygones I remember;
now November’s dying ember
leaves me longing for the past.

Damning is this aging season; 
robbing hopes with truthful treason;
greying dreams are now the reason
that I’m feeling nature’s warn.
Looking long into the mirror,
aging lines becoming clearer;
end of year is drawing nearer
on this late November morn.


November 11, 2020
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Peck Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 10:21 AM
John, that is beautiful! It speaks the aging language perfectly. Congratulations on your wins! Hugs
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March 30, 2021 at 2:30 AM
Thanks so much for taking the time to read this older poem, Ann, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Hamilton Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:07 PM
This is an excellent write I thoroughly enjoyed unfortunately I relate to it's message, not fun getting older. Congrats John on a great write and win!
Gondolf Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 4:40 AM
Thanks, John, lm glad you enjoyed it. The reality of life is rapidly catching up to us. Thanks for hosting the contest. John
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November 22, 2020 at 11:43 AM
We just have to enjoy all while we can. It comes and goes so quick. What a beautiful poem, I love it :)
Gondolf Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 1:56 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Akkina, I appreciate it. John
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November 20, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Hi, John! I am enjoying reviewing your poetry today....and this one has a special meaning...both the literal and figurative. I seem to be dreading this winter more than usual (though today's sun and 60's weather eases that!), and I take note of my own ....shall I just say "early fall"? of life. But mostly enjoying everyday I have. Good poetry is a blessing. Miss you and the family. Cheryl
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November 20, 2020 at 10:40 AM
Wow, Cheryl, what a great surprise to see you here on PS reading my humble thoughts! I've written several poems like this, it seems the older I get the more I reminisce about the past and the more I ponder my future. And of course Covid hasn't helped any this year. Thanks for taking the time to review my writing. I hope you and Bobby have a great Thanksgiving. Love ya, John
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November 15, 2020 at 4:44 PM
oh this is SO good and I love the meter you put to it as well. Gotta fave this.
Gondolf Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your comments, Andrea, I’m glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for adding it to your favorites. John
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November 13, 2020 at 5:37 AM
Nothing we can do about it John the season goes and we go and another season comes and a new life is born. The cycle of life. Great poem a fave. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Gondolf Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Thank for sharing your thoughts, Jenn, and thanks for saving it as a favorite. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:47 PM
"This aging season" So many meanings around this thought. I see, not the end of a moment or life- a season. I see change and rearrange. I do feel the tenderness of your words- some melancholy within. This is so beautifully written and presented my dear sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 7:49 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Brandy, I appreciate you and your support. Hugs, John
Raiser Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:09 PM
This one goes to the quick. Great piece!
Gondolf Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 7:35 PM
Thanks, Belsen, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Cunningham Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:11 AM
A journey of life through the seasons, well composed John, hopefully many more seasons are in store. Hope you're well Tom
Gondolf Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate the comments and visit. John
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November 11, 2020 at 5:37 AM
- It sounds like a miserable morning ... drink some coffee, John :) - A great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gondolf Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Thanks for the laugh, Anne-Lise, I think I will have a cup. Have a great day. Hugs, John
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