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A Grey Fall Morning

Waking on this grey fall morning; in the air there lies a warning; rising angst as fears aborning; feeling late November’s chill. Darkened clouds obscure the daybreak, as I nurse this aging headache; warmer days are but a keepsake gone forever, summer’s thrill. Thinking back as springtime’s grooming brought me hope with nature’s blooming; summer’s warmth left me assuming that forever youth would last. Suddenly there came September causing bygones I remember; now November’s dying ember leaves me longing for the past. Damning is this aging season; robbing hopes with truthful treason; greying dreams are now the reason that I’m feeling nature’s warn. Looking long into the mirror, aging lines becoming clearer; end of year is drawing nearer on this late November morn. November 11, 2020

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Date: 3/29/2021 10:21:00 AM
John, that is beautiful! It speaks the aging language perfectly. Congratulations on your wins! Hugs
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/30/2021 2:30:00 AM
Thanks so much for taking the time to read this older poem, Ann, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Date: 1/16/2021 12:07:00 PM
This is an excellent write I thoroughly enjoyed unfortunately I relate to it's message, not fun getting older. Congrats John on a great write and win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/17/2021 4:40:00 AM
Thanks, John, lm glad you enjoyed it. The reality of life is rapidly catching up to us. Thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 11/22/2020 11:43:00 AM
We just have to enjoy all while we can. It comes and goes so quick. What a beautiful poem, I love it :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/22/2020 1:56:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Akkina, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/20/2020 9:36:00 AM
Hi, John! I am enjoying reviewing your poetry today....and this one has a special meaning...both the literal and figurative. I seem to be dreading this winter more than usual (though today's sun and 60's weather eases that!), and I take note of my own ....shall I just say "early fall"? of life. But mostly enjoying everyday I have. Good poetry is a blessing. Miss you and the family. Cheryl
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/20/2020 10:40:00 AM
Wow, Cheryl, what a great surprise to see you here on PS reading my humble thoughts! I've written several poems like this, it seems the older I get the more I reminisce about the past and the more I ponder my future. And of course Covid hasn't helped any this year. Thanks for taking the time to review my writing. I hope you and Bobby have a great Thanksgiving. Love ya, John
Date: 11/15/2020 4:44:00 PM
oh this is SO good and I love the meter you put to it as well. Gotta fave this.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/15/2020 5:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your comments, Andrea, I’m glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for adding it to your favorites. John
Date: 11/13/2020 5:37:00 AM
Nothing we can do about it John the season goes and we go and another season comes and a new life is born. The cycle of life. Great poem a fave. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/14/2020 7:08:00 AM
Thank for sharing your thoughts, Jenn, and thanks for saving it as a favorite. Hugs, John
Date: 11/11/2020 5:47:00 PM
"This aging season" So many meanings around this thought. I see, not the end of a moment or life- a season. I see change and rearrange. I do feel the tenderness of your words- some melancholy within. This is so beautifully written and presented my dear sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/11/2020 7:49:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Brandy, I appreciate you and your support. Hugs, John
Date: 11/11/2020 5:09:00 PM
This one goes to the quick. Great piece!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/11/2020 7:35:00 PM
Thanks, Belsen, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 11/11/2020 10:11:00 AM
A journey of life through the seasons, well composed John, hopefully many more seasons are in store. Hope you're well Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/11/2020 12:09:00 PM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate the comments and visit. John
Date: 11/11/2020 5:37:00 AM
- It sounds like a miserable morning ... drink some coffee, John :) - A great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/11/2020 5:40:00 AM
Thanks for the laugh, Anne-Lise, I think I will have a cup. Have a great day. Hugs, John

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