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Awwww!

\That one always makes me cry.

My father stole my wife, Nadine, And they run off together. My brother took off after them, Hell bent fer leather. I would have gone myself but then, I was on the job, So who was there to turn to then, But Brother Billy-Bob. He found them in a cheap motel, The other side of the mountain, Burst in the room and pulled his gun, And Dad went down 'thout countin'. Billy-Bob then grabbed Nadine, And threw her in the truck. You'd think he'd bring her straight to me, But there ain't no such luck. He looked into her big blue eyes, Said,"You are now my gal. I really ought to take you home, But yer purty as a spotted cow." So now Nadine's with Billy-Bob, But I guess I'll just leave her. The best revenge on both of them, Is for me to let him keep her.

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Date: 5/7/2016 9:47:00 PM
Hysterical!
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Judy Ball
Date: 5/8/2016 7:02:00 PM
Thanks so much Tom. Glad you got a giggle from it. God Bless, JB
Date: 5/7/2016 7:50:00 PM
Ha Ha! A1, story Judy. Enjoyed this Regards, Craig
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Judy Ball
Date: 5/7/2016 11:30:00 PM
Thanks so much Craig. Glad you got a giggle from it. God Bless, JB
Date: 5/7/2016 7:10:00 PM
oh Judy, I have missed you and your stunning humor. I LOVE this. Great to be your first comment~
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Judy Ball
Date: 5/7/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Andrea. Glad to know you liked it. God Bless, JB

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