A Child Recalls

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Symbol of the crown chakra, the Sahasrara, gateway to universal consciousness

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By my enabled senses five, attention externalised, I beheld the magical world of myriad objects, reflecting their luminous auras. As I exhaled, the world disappeared and through my open fontanel correspondent to the crown chakra, I entwined with universal consciousness, melding with God’s blissful domain of boundless love and soft white light. My subtle body felt God in-dwelling all forms, breathing His life force by His sublime pranic breath, magnetically energising each being by Holy Spirit. Then sadly, as my body aged, to my dismay, the fontanel closed, thus severing the divine connection. I now feel incomplete. dreams hold forth promise cajoling us to let go~ for God is within 05-June-2022 Like A Child Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/11/2022 1:49:00 PM

Your, "A child recalls" is a creative write. A child does remember many things about their young life. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend................

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/11/2022 7:16:00 PM

Thanks Paula. This alludes to our connection with universal consciousness, which we were born with, slowly blurring as fulcrum shifted from heart to head. Meditation reverses the process, shifting back to the spiritual heart centre.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/5/2022 5:41:00 PM

Beautiful symbol of the crown chakra. I enjoyed your thoughts through your Haibun, my friend. May inspiration continue to befriend you. Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/5/2022 6:00:00 PM

Thanks, Bill.