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A Bolt From the Blue 2

Score's zip to zilch, last inning's near halfway through at Gettysburg Commons' baseball league playoff. Champion Graycoats at their posts hitherto - Blue Jackets hear the pitcher's husky cough - a clue to the catcher - this batter's toast. Pickett lobs the pitch from high on his perch, Meade smacks it past the church house roof almost - a bolt from the Blue, Gray gets lost in the search and Meade makes an easy trip 'round three bases. Hancock is next and takes his turn with relief. He whacks one to the pitcher of all places running like blue blazes in disbelief. He speeds to first base while Meade makes it on in. Then Hancock circles the field - score is ought-two As Pickett sits on the ball holding his shin. In shock, he volleys a few words of blue. The umpire approaches, a'raisin' his hands, "I heard balderdash," he bawls with a frown. "Game's called for cussin', but the score still stands." Singing the blues, Graycoats hand over the crown. New "toasts" of the town are Hancock and G. Meade. They both talk a blue streak to boast of the coup. Dazed by their disbelief, Graycoats recede. And for weeks, Gen'ral Pickett's leg's - black and blue. written 12 January 2015

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Date: 1/31/2016 10:24:00 PM
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Date: 1/25/2016 1:22:00 PM
Very well written with great info. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Congrats Reason, thank you for entering this contest :)
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Date: 1/24/2016 9:32:00 PM
Thanks, Edward, for the opportunity. Appreciate the placement.
Date: 1/12/2016 3:09:00 PM
nice write, the poem's well written
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:32:00 PM
Baseball was played often during the Civil War. It seems strange to us to think they had time for such trivial pursuits. Link to - http://www.baseball-almanac.com/articles/aubrecht2004b.shtml

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