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Romance Ripple

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Written: February 19, 2024 _____________________________________ Loving with a lucent locus is Lissom, mooring a mystic's sibylline moves as Felicity finds me, I float forward, fusing both fantasies' fused yaws, a rendezvous with time rejecting zigzag of a jigsaw mind love acts as a "kinematic" spark your pulse kept me vibrant a wave of love washed over us yet, venom was tossed onto me without my love, you won't survive  I am an artist shaping your fate, our bedtime talks are ethereal.   Your loving bird of paradise  flies from earth to sky. fuchsia fragranced feathers. beauteous bliss, priss-phobic parody  enhances mental sensuality. rain sings a warm tune tonight. I'm trapped by my heartbeat calm.  I find serene places akin to cascades. lowering my long-standing anxiety.  I unleash angels' shadows.  who redeems me from deceit? Fulfilled fears, ritualistic romance, split subtlety spreads semantics true, clear steps to achievement  love: related to "pretend" and "extend"  means can indicate a cease where symptoms swirl honest answers might seem harsh watch a wild waltz; wind is winsome, reconsider before choosing the dynamic nature of love  is subject to a sporadic storm. Her heart longs for a reunion, Ignore grayness of twilight  drifting in scented love letters  crafted on the smooth seashore stored in translucent glass vessels, featuring ageless verses the jars shall traverse estuaries, that brought her to his hallowed Isle  dotted with perennial blooms gemmed shells evoke tropical muses, tomorrow, she'll be by his side, held by harmless sun-kissed kalon  I sense your silky swell serenading me, fleeringly, with feeling your imagination has created me a vivid version of amethyst and deep sapphire, voicing in verse, vibrant verve unfetter me Your intriguing muse has a bright spirit.

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Date: 2/22/2024 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. And you thoroughly deserve it. Your alliterations, imagery and romance make this poem great. Your poetry is so metaphoric.
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Date: 2/22/2024 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on another winning brilliant write!
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Date: 2/22/2024 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 2/20/2024 10:54:00 AM
This is beautiful- a real pleasure to read
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Date: 2/19/2024 3:46:00 PM
dearest Sotto--your poem was a delight to read -- it's filled with romance and metaphors of longing. I especially liked: I am an artist shaping your fate, our bedtime talks are ethereal. Your loving bird of paradise flies from earth to sky. fuchsia fragranced feathers.” Your alliterations were magnificent (watch a wild waltz; wind is winsome) and captivating. Your poem is artistically penned as only you can. Wishing you a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 2/19/2024 1:37:00 PM
Wonderfully dwelling in love and longing, my friend. Much enjoyed the romantic tenor of your poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/19/2024 11:57:00 AM
How romantic and beautiful is this poem, i love as always the metaphorical depth and use of alliterations and how youv paired words in this creative and soulfully moving write. So well delivered too! I especially love the way youv expressed longing with lines such as “ I am an artist shaping your fate, our bedtime talks are ethereal. Your loving bird of paradise flies from earth to sky. fuchsia fragranced feathers.” So unique and artistic! Left me in awe captivated! Impeccable write!
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