Romance Ripple

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Written: February 19, 2024
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Loving with a lucent locus is Lissom,
mooring a mystic's sibylline moves
as Felicity finds me, I float forward,
fusing both fantasies' fused yaws,
a rendezvous with time
rejecting zigzag of a jigsaw mind
love acts as a "kinematic" spark
your pulse kept me vibrant
a wave of love washed over us
yet, venom was tossed onto me
without my love, you won't survive 
I am an artist shaping your fate,
our bedtime talks are ethereal.
 
Your loving bird of paradise 
flies from earth to sky.
fuchsia fragranced feathers.
beauteous bliss, priss-phobic parody 
enhances mental sensuality.
rain sings a warm tune tonight.
I'm trapped by my heartbeat calm. 
I find serene places akin to cascades.
lowering my long-standing anxiety. 
I unleash angels' shadows. 
who redeems me from deceit?

Fulfilled fears, ritualistic romance,
split subtlety spreads semantics
true, clear steps to achievement 
love: related to "pretend" and "extend" 
means can indicate a cease
where symptoms swirl
honest answers might seem harsh
watch a wild waltz; wind is winsome,
reconsider before choosing
the dynamic nature of love 
is subject to a sporadic storm.

Her heart longs for a reunion,
Ignore grayness of twilight 
drifting in scented love letters 
crafted on the smooth seashore
stored in translucent glass vessels,
featuring ageless verses
the jars shall traverse estuaries,
that brought her to his hallowed Isle 
dotted with perennial blooms
gemmed shells evoke tropical muses,
tomorrow, she'll be by his side,
held by harmless sun-kissed kalon 
I sense your silky swell serenading me,
fleeringly, with feeling
your imagination has created me
a vivid version of amethyst and deep sapphire,
voicing in verse, vibrant verve unfetter me
Your intriguing muse has a bright spirit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 2/22/2024 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. And you thoroughly deserve it. Your alliterations, imagery and romance make this poem great. Your poetry is so metaphoric.
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Date: 2/22/2024 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on another winning brilliant write!
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Date: 2/22/2024 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 2/20/2024 10:54:00 AM
This is beautiful- a real pleasure to read
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Date: 2/19/2024 1:37:00 PM
Wonderfully dwelling in love and longing, my friend. Much enjoyed the romantic tenor of your poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/19/2024 11:57:00 AM
How romantic and beautiful is this poem, i love as always the metaphorical depth and use of alliterations and how youv paired words in this creative and soulfully moving write. So well delivered too! I especially love the way youv expressed longing with lines such as “ I am an artist shaping your fate, our bedtime talks are ethereal. Your loving bird of paradise flies from earth to sky. fuchsia fragranced feathers.” So unique and artistic! Left me in awe captivated! Impeccable write!
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