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The sun had just risen over town, it was a beautiful morning And outside Baker's new Bakery, a long queue was forming The aroma of fresh baking was lingering in the morning air Words alone cannot describe it; you just have to be there. Bill, Sara, and Tania had been working throughout the night There was no margin for error, everything had to be just right Bill then quickly unbolted the door to let the customers inside Everything sold quickly; the Bakers and Tania beamed with pride. Fresh bread, doughnuts and whoopie pies were the first to go The shelves soon emptied , there was nothing left on show Sara said "I wasn't expecting this, such a fantastic turnout We'd better start baking again, I don't want folks to miss out". The peace of the morning was broken by the stage from Santa Fe Bringing Judge Jack Horne, as the court was in session that day Two deputies accompanied him, Mike Gentile and Duke Beaufort They all alighted from the stage and walked over to the court. Meanwhile, Ranger David, Deputy Terry along with Sheriff Koplin Were escorting two mean looking outlaws and were just going in Judge Horne greeted them and said "What's that pleasant aroma? " The sheriff replied," We now have a bakery run by Bill and Sara". The Sheriff added "Milton Creek is growing bigger day by day And we could do with a permanent judge, be good if you could stay Of course, we'd employ Mike and Duke as the town court deputies And you'd be bringing to our town your knowledge and expertise". Judge Horne replied "I'm getting tired of travelling, so, yes from me Duke and Mike have often said the same and I'm sure they'll agree" The court session started, and the two outlaws were found guilty The judge sentenced them both to two years in Yuma Penitentiary. Mike and Duke took charge of the prisoners, and they boarded the train Sheriff Koplin said "Good riddance, I hope we don't see them again The sheriff said to the judge" I'll walk you to Aces and get you checked in And introduce you to the lovely lady that runs it a southern girl called Lin Mayor Tom was walking by the station and noticed two ladies had got off He wondered who they were and as he got near, his Stetson he did doff They smiled and the dark haired one said "I'm Caren and this is Anne -Lise We're both new in town so could you direct us to the Manx Saloon, please". "My pleasure" said Tom, "I take it's Jan the saloon owner you want to see" He offered to take their suitcases and said "Ladies, If you'd like to follow me Jan had often told me she needed more staff to work in the Manx Saloon Your arrival today is a godsend and I know for her you'll be a welcome boon". They arrived at the Manx; Jan and Deb welcomed them to Milton Creek Jan said "Most days it's just been me and Deb and it's been a busy week Tania our singer is only part time now as she works at Baker's Bakery Anne-Lise said" We're used to hard graft having worked in Dodge City. Mayor Tom said "Well I'll leave you now and I'll book two rooms at the hotel Jan was now smiling from ear to ear; she was so relieved you could tell He met up with Sheriff Koplin who told him about Mike, Duke and Jack "Thats darn good news" said Tom, " Because a town judge we did lack". Tom added" Well, sheriff you can add two more, I'm on my way to see Lin Jan's two new saloon girls have arrived and I'm just going to book them in" Then they both heard the rumbling of a wagon that was heading their way "Another stranger in town " said the sheriff, "It's been an eventful day". The man pulled up and got down and said "John Lawless is my name I'm the best blacksmith west of the Sierras and that's my claim to fame I heard this town needs a blacksmith because the last one passed away If I can earn enough money to earn an honest living then I'll surely stay. Tom and the sheriff shook hands with John to welcome him to town It had been one hell of long day and now the sun was going down Sheriff Koplin said "I'm going to the saloon; I'm feeling quite thirsty And to meet Jan's new bar girls, you're both welcome to join me. Written 22nd March 2024.

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Date: 4/11/2024 1:19:00 AM
Milton Creek is definitely growing at a fast pace, Tom!! I haven't been around much due to health reasons, but I am pleased to be reading your delightful narratives once again. Best regards // paul
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Date: 4/11/2024 4:07:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear that Paul, I hope you're soon on the road to recovery. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 4/8/2024 3:12:00 AM
I love how you're keeping Milton Creek alive, Tom. Great writing and storytelling as usual. Hope all is well...Charlie
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Date: 4/8/2024 4:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Charlie, Everyone seems to like them so I'll just keep going. All good here and I hope you are too. Tom
Date: 4/6/2024 10:34:00 PM
Looks like a lot of citizens I recognize in your town. I didn't know you were too familiar with Jack Horne. He is such a great friend of mine.
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Date: 4/6/2024 10:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, I don't know Jack but have seen his name, it was suggested he'd make a good judge. I know he's good friends with Jan. Everyone is welcome, the only rule is no guns allowed, they have to be checked in on arrival. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 4/6/2024 3:39:00 PM
Well its sure getting a bustle on it seems it's On account of those Baker's bread and cakes With creams..If you don't watch out you'll Become a city, and old Klaus will be round..And That bottom feeder he ain't pretty..So maybe Turn round your signposts for a while.' Oh but You are over two centuries ago, yes now thats More the style.'
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Date: 4/6/2024 10:16:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe, it's when towns become bigger and eventually a city that problems begin, maybe a fence around the town lol, don't know where we'll get the wood from as it's mainly grassland around here. Hooe you're keeping well Joe. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 4/3/2024 1:40:00 AM
Your poems need to be published eventually.
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Date: 4/3/2024 4:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, it is something I've thought about doing. Tom
Date: 4/2/2024 5:25:00 AM
Tom, honored am I to have been included as the saga honoring Milt continues ! Especially with fresh bread permeating the air! I have been away and my muse asleep for a bit but hopefully I am refreshed and thrilled to have found this, thank you! Happy Tuesday!!!
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Date: 4/2/2024 5:47:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike, I've been away too so haven't been around much of late. When your name was mentioned it was a no brainer to swear you in as a deputy, in my mayoral capacity, a a big welcome to Milton Creek. That bakery will be our downfall, I've already put on a few pounds lol. Enjoy the rest of the week. Tom
Date: 4/1/2024 3:16:00 AM
Loved your sequel, Tom. I was not well and missed even your deserving POTD. These days I don't have much time so if you don't comment as you used to, I might forget. Hope it's not dementia :) Great poem and hope you had a lovely Easter.
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Date: 4/1/2024 6:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, was going to soupmail you, Ive been away again, holidaying in the UK so had no time for Soup, I hope you had a lovely Easter and are keeping well. Tom
Date: 3/31/2024 7:58:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by my page to say congratulations on my POTD. I hope this is the best Easter Sunday for you and yours. Sara K
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Date: 3/31/2024 8:41:00 AM
Your welcome Sara, I hope you and your family have a very happy Easter. Tom
Date: 3/29/2024 9:26:00 PM
Enjoyed the read Tom, have a good time wherever you are visiting… Beryl
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Date: 3/29/2024 10:10:00 PM
Thank you very much Beryl, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're both well, I hope you have a happy Easter. Tom
Date: 3/27/2024 5:30:00 PM
Marvellous, Tom. Great to see Milton Creek on the up and up. Have to say, that the impending arrival of the railroad gets my muse tingling.
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Date: 3/28/2024 9:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Terry, of course all new residents will have to go through a probationary period just to be on the safe side, never know who might be chancing their arm. Lol. Greetings from Centerparcs, I'm on my travels again, hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 3/27/2024 6:59:00 AM
Tom, this narrative poem is SO well-written, upbeat, and entertaining. Janice
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Date: 3/27/2024 9:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice, I'm happy you enjoyed the story. Just looked in as I'm travelling again. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 3/26/2024 5:15:00 AM
Another fine chapter in the series. Enjoying these
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Date: 3/26/2024 8:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Marugu, I'm glad you are enjoying them. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 3/24/2024 10:47:00 AM
A FAV for my collection, Tom. Thank you for including Sara and Me in your fine Milton Creek collection of poems. This was a special one with all the new people moving in and the opening of our bakery. Thanks for making it a success story overnight! We'll be needing more help. Welcome everyone that's joined us in this new tale of Milton Creek. You'll all be welcome additions to our growing little town. Well written and entertaining poetry, Tom. Write On, my friend! Bill the baker.
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Date: 3/24/2024 11:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Bill, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Now that the railroad is bringing in more people you might have to make the Bakery a 24 thing, mind you drive throughs haven't been invented yet lol. Hope you're keeping well. Thanks too for the fave. Tom
Date: 3/24/2024 8:10:00 AM
Feels like an invite to your town Tom. Can't wait to have a taste of Bill and Sara's crafts. Great one.
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Date: 3/24/2024 8:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Tonye, you'd be very welcome, the town is growing fast. Glad you enjoyed it. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 3/24/2024 6:58:00 AM
Another showcasing of your talent Tom! I do love these tales of Milton Creek. I’m glad to see more people getting involved and having some fun. I thank you again for always including me! Well done sir!!
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Date: 3/24/2024 7:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Mark, it was challenging getting everyone a mention but I managed to pull it off. Now that we have a bakery we might need a gym lol. Tom
Date: 3/23/2024 1:21:00 PM
Love this fun write - Jan told me about Judge Horne, LOL (love it)
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Date: 3/23/2024 11:05:00 PM
Thank you very much Jack, glad you enjoyed it, a big welcome to Milton Creek. Tom
Date: 3/23/2024 12:20:00 PM
Fun as always, Tom!
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:38:00 PM
Thank you very much Kim, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 3/23/2024 7:40:00 AM
A great story in the Saga of Milton Creek, Very nicely told Tom
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Date: 3/23/2024 8:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph, I'm happy you enjoyed the continuing story of Milton Creek. I thought I would have run out of ideas by now. Tom
Date: 3/23/2024 7:12:00 AM
- ... being a bar girl has never been my dream :))) - Maybe I could work a little at John the blacksmith, when the bar is closed ... some handy work :))) - Thank you for including me in this wonderful story ... which is becoming more and more alive, Tom :) - hugs
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Date: 3/23/2024 7:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise, I'm sure John might need a little help sometimes, I know you're very creative. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 3/23/2024 6:54:00 AM
Another fine creation, Tom. The town now has talented group of people to deliver all kinds of services. Kudos to all!
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Date: 3/23/2024 7:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, glad you enjoyed it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Date: 3/23/2024 4:52:00 AM
Good one Tom, I see Milton Creek is now turning into a Miltropolis, and suburbia beckons lol, the expansion can only be a good one, the Bakery is off to a flyer, and a new boomtown is in the making, another exceptionally well written piece, cheers David
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Date: 3/23/2024 5:45:00 AM
Thank you very much David, it certainly is growing and for the better, at this rate I'll have to write a book lol. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 3/23/2024 1:30:00 AM
I love it that I am the "dark-haired" one - I dye my hair burgandy every six weeks so I do not have white hair; glad someone noticed! Ha! Thank you for this one! And thank you for including me. Milton was one of my all-time favorite poets, Tom!
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Date: 3/23/2024 1:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Caren, it was a no brainer when your name was mentioned, I know how fond you were of Milton. A big welcome to Milton Creek, have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 3/22/2024 8:50:00 PM
So Milton Creek is expanding every day. The bakery run by Bill and Sara must be a sort of happy shelter after a hard day to have a pleasant munch in the evening. Now John Lawless too has joined as a blacksmith. Let Milton Creek's fame rise day by day! Excellent storytelling, dear Tom.
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, it started off as one main street and with the arrival of the railroad it is expanding fast, be a city at this rate lol. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Enjoy your weekend.. Tom
Date: 3/22/2024 5:21:00 PM
Milton Creek is expanding with new residents that will be welcome additions to our community. Excellent storytelling, as usual Mr. Mayor. The new deputies will be needed and Duke’s name…. Ahhh, It’s so John Wayne! Welcome to all of you and have your first meal at Aces on the house!
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2024 1:47:00 AM
I see it the same way you do. Some find fault with everything… must be a name for such a complex.
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:07:00 AM
Thank you very much Lin, glad you enjoyed this one, I've written 16 of these now Soup /Milton Creek poems. I thought folks would get tired of them, seems I was wrong. Can't see how some would regard them as thinly veiled bully poems. They must have a guilty conscience if they see themselves in my writes. Thats a lovely gesture on your part, a free slap up meal. Tom
Date: 3/22/2024 4:47:00 PM
A compelling story, Tom. I think I'd like to live in Milton Creek, for all my favorite people are now residing there. Bill and I are delighted that our bakery is already a big hit. I guess we'll be baking tonight. :-) Am faving. Have a splendid evening, Mayor Tom.
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, your bakery is a big hit, nothing beats the smell of fresh baking, at this rate you might need more staff lol. Thanks for the fave. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2024 9:07:00 PM
Awww… thanks, Sara.
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