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As time flows gently by and we grow old in each other's arms
Sailing away on our memories each rising sun seems brighter 
I love the way you look at me forever young like in our teenager years 
Holding the limelight of an adoring beauty captivates the soul supreme 

Your eyes still shine with the sparkle of diamond blue skies
Each passing new moon our destiny beyond the milky way beckons 
I love you most of all, it's no lie
Faraway in a universal dream fulfilled 

Not only my lover, you were my best friend too
United under one flag upon the fig tree a dove sings 
Every minute I think about what we have done together
Such blessings embrace even the smallest dewdrop kisses 

Our love for each other has always been true touched by your divine presence  
An offerings laid before your temple kneels  adoringly 
Can you remember the song that was our ballad royal 
When we danced cheek to cheek breathing within your air 

Only  then in a silent warm closeness breathless whispers 
Did I believe in you who skipped inside each heartbeat 
Realizing  in the second beat how much I care glowing with desire 
You are my oxygen as I breathe as one song singing warmly in your air 









A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
01.06.2016
(unrhymed Quatrain)
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Date: 6/30/2016 8:06:00 AM
sunshine that was amazing! thumps up
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Date: 6/30/2016 10:38:00 AM
- Tonye, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2016 5:57:00 AM
Beautiful, passionate declaration. Only one caveat: In the first line, I believe the word bye should be spelled, by....
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Date: 6/18/2016 1:09:00 PM
... and no one else has "seen" it ..... thanks my friend, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/13/2016 4:40:00 PM
Wow! This is a "Lovers" poem all the way!!! This is "read and feel!" Beautiful Anne-Lise and Liam! :-)
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Date: 6/14/2016 7:40:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Walter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 12:40:00 PM
Such fulfillment should be capture via poetry or a poem. Enjoyed... VERLENA
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Date: 6/10/2016 1:14:00 PM
- Glad you enjoy it, Verlena :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 3:16:00 PM
Romantic indeed. And just as touching. Congrats for your POTD. Marilyn
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Date: 6/9/2016 3:39:00 PM
- Marilyn, thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 1:00:00 PM
Love the romantic collaboration by you two. Makes my heart go ahhhh. AWESOME. love phyl
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Date: 6/9/2016 3:40:00 PM
- Glad you enjoy it, Phyllis :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/6/2016 10:34:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam! Wow!Congratulations to you both on POTW!A most very beautiful outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!You both deserve this great honor.I' m so very extremely happy for you two.Well done!Just awesome!Enjoy your whole week!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
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Date: 6/6/2016 11:39:00 AM
- Dorian, thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/6/2016 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations Anne-Lise and Liam on another wonderful poem of the week feature :)
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Date: 6/6/2016 11:38:00 AM
- Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Casarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/6/2016 8:14:00 AM
Congrats on POTW...very well done...the both of you...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/6/2016 11:37:00 AM
- Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Winged :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/6/2016 12:03:00 AM
Liam is certainly a man with a Big Heart. When a poet's writings can smoothly incorporate into another poet's writings, it's truly a clever skill. I can almost recognize hints of Liam's footprints in this lovely collaboration ;) well done for POTW
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Date: 6/6/2016 11:36:00 AM
- The one who knows Liam knows he has a big heart :) - I greatly appreciate our friendship :) - Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Angeline :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/5/2016 9:14:00 AM
Enjoyed the romantic tone in your work - very passionate. Displays a beautiful heart. Congrats on the Poem of the Week recognition! - Jesse
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:22:00 AM
- Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Jesse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/5/2016 8:17:00 AM
Great collaboration Anne-Lise and Liam, congratulations on POTW honors and its tribute to love...
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:22:00 AM
- Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/5/2016 7:36:00 AM
Best Congratulations Anne-Lise and Liam on the POTW honor!! Very Well-Done!! This is indeed a quite beautiful and enchanting write. "True Love" makes the world go round!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:21:00 AM
- Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/4/2016 1:50:00 PM
A poem close to my heart, a very lovey poem Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2016 1:59:00 PM
- Glad you enjoy it, Edward :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/4/2016 8:01:00 AM
A very wonderful romantic poem my dearest friend, Anne and Liam! A perfect 7++ for each of you. Loving it and I'd immensely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing! A blessed weekend! love lots and big hug, GL
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Date: 6/4/2016 12:05:00 PM
- Leonora, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/3/2016 8:35:00 AM
You and Liam write so well together!! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/3/2016 10:34:00 AM
- A pleasure to joining pens With, Liam :) - Richard, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/2/2016 7:57:00 PM
Very romantic collab. You two made sweet music together.
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Date: 6/3/2016 5:38:00 AM
- Andrea, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/2/2016 8:43:00 AM
Superb write Anne-Lise and Liam, you described elegantly the essence of love. Hugs
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Date: 6/2/2016 11:10:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/2/2016 6:57:00 AM
Another beautiful collaboration poem, Anne-Lise and Liam. Very well written. T.J
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Date: 6/2/2016 7:32:00 AM
- Teppo, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/2/2016 4:19:00 AM
A beautiful write:) Well done, Anne-lise and Liam:)
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Date: 6/2/2016 7:31:00 AM
- Jo, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/1/2016 4:10:00 PM
also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated wishing you all a blessing of a week filled with smiles
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Date: 6/1/2016 4:07:00 PM
A divine hymn to true love that grows prettier with the passing of years! Another marvel of a stunning collaboration. A seven to each of you dear, Anne-Lise and dear Liam!
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Date: 6/2/2016 7:30:00 AM
- Demetrios, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/1/2016 4:07:00 PM
anne lise thank you for the pleasure of joining pens with me your words sang a beautiful tune in this wishing you a blessing of a day dear pal
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Date: 6/2/2016 7:33:00 AM
- Thank you, Liam :)
Date: 6/1/2016 4:03:00 PM
True love never dies is absolutely true and no one can deny it. Lovely poem written with lovely heart's rhythm. Really enjoyed this beautiful poem. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl
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Date: 6/2/2016 7:30:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Bl :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/1/2016 3:35:00 PM
such a tender romantic write Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 6/1/2016 4:36:00 PM
- Jan, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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