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Chocolate Covered Cherries

Under those wild blue skies.
Her favorite fruit was chocolate 
covered cherries.

As the skies fell somewhere in time.
She drifted down from the clouds. 
To be dropped into his arms alone. 

He always loved the way the juice  
dripped off her plump red lips .
As he caught the drips on his tongue. 

Capturing some unknown secrets.
As he licked her juicy red lips .
She felt the thrust of his lust in her.

He so loved that childlike wonder in her.
As he looked into her dreamy eyes.
The stars made love to the universe.

As the skies of blue drift over time.
The night stars formed a mystery.
They were full of love, beauty, and lies.



9/30/ 2013

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  1. Date: 12/21/2014 6:14:00 AM

    Debbie this is a positive jewel of a poem, makes one feel tranquil just reading it. Merry Christmas .Anne
  1. Date: 12/17/2014 7:38:00 AM

    - Dear Debbie, I will bring you beautiful wishes for Christmas - I hope you will get a lovely time with your family and friends - Miss you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/24/2014 3:26:00 AM

    - I check your poems from time to time, Debbie - Miss new poem from you :) - thanks for your lovely visit and comments on my poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/23/2014 8:37:00 AM

    By the way, fairway doesn't have cherries of the sour kind. But they do have California apricots. The tartness is pleasing. I like the idea of exotic eating.
  1. Date: 11/23/2014 8:34:00 AM

    Debbie, yes I have not been here much myself. However, it is great to hear from you. We have very busy lives on the short stint of existence. If I was able to make you laugh, that is wonderful. I always loved reading your work. I will try to post more here. I hope you are well. My best wishes and thoughts are with you.
  1. Date: 11/18/2014 10:48:00 PM

    Food is so sensuous like this poem, Debbie. I noticed the twist at the end. The poem has a sense of such fantasy *(fairy tale essence) that It is easy to imagine it is a lie in the end. i really liked this and glad to see you back.
  1. Date: 10/14/2014 3:02:00 PM

    - Debbie, just want to say that it's nice to see you :) - All the best to you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/19/2014 7:26:00 AM

    Debbie, I have been away for a while--not prison, but my head has been dealing with life and work related matters. However, you have a glorious talent. I like cherries and chocolate both. Someone recently told me that Fairway Markets has dried sour cherries so I am going to try them. I'll let you know what I think. Anyway, you are the romantic poet of this site. I hope you are well.
  1. Date: 7/28/2014 6:02:00 PM

    in the morning the sun arose, and filled the morning skies... still love it babe...xox
  1. Date: 7/28/2014 6:01:00 PM

    Passionate work that you have penned..Reads like a great love but built on unsure foundation..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
  1. Date: 6/19/2014 11:44:00 PM

    Yes, you have not posted a new one, but this one is getting still a lot of look sees!!! Hope your next one is as good!
  1. Date: 6/15/2014 7:50:00 AM

    beautiful indeed
  1. Date: 6/15/2014 3:26:00 AM

    Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
  1. Date: 6/14/2014 8:01:00 PM

    A clever and sensuous write..well done Debbie. Hugs
  1. Date: 6/11/2014 8:37:00 AM

    A great poem with excellent imagery.
  1. Date: 6/11/2014 7:31:00 AM

    Sexy, sad, delicious and mysterious. Outstanding piece!
  1. Date: 6/9/2014 11:00:00 AM

    Oh this is so good,,i may be a month late seeing this,,,but the impact still is so inspiring,, i know i have just read it...
  1. Date: 6/8/2014 7:55:00 PM

    So beautifully sensuous and cleverly written - love the twist at the end - very crafty! I really enjoyed reading this while eating chocolate covered cherries:-)
  1. Date: 6/8/2014 7:13:00 PM

    Hello Debbie, What an intoxicating poem, love the Chocolate Covered Cherries drips.. The imagery's superb and the ending holds up brilliantly, romanticly delicious. Linda
  1. Date: 6/3/2014 7:39:00 PM

    Romantic work with a twist of trouble in the last line. Good show! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
  1. Date: 6/3/2014 6:19:00 PM

    Wonderful write Debbie you have written here. I have never heard of chocolate cherries but they sound delicious...all the best, my friend....peter
  1. Date: 6/3/2014 4:11:00 PM

    Holy smokes! Great write Deb, not only because of the very sensual metaphor, but because growing up, chocolate covered cherries were my favorite candy--got a box every year for Christmas. Can't eat em anymore--too rich, the candy that is lol Great ending, too, darling...xxx...:)
  1. Date: 5/29/2014 6:56:00 AM

    Romantic, sensual, and told with beautiful images.
  1. Date: 5/28/2014 9:16:00 PM

    Tell me lies, tell me sweet little lies. Love is a surrender to what can fulfill the heart. Hoping that somehow in the end it will not part. The gambler knows the odds are what they are. And the hopelessly romantic always wish upon a star. Hi Debbie, nice to have you visit. Peace. :)
  1. Date: 5/28/2014 5:56:00 PM

    Hi there! You do have a way with words and images. Thank-you for your comment. A sad ending here. A white lie is OK I think, but not the kind you are talking about. How does love and passion go astray? It happens quite often--even to those with the best intentions at the onset. Always a pleasure to hear from you--I have been very busy, but I have a fond feeling for the talent you have--and that is no lie. You have a dreamy way of telling a story. CIAO for now.
  1. Date: 5/28/2014 3:41:00 PM

    Chocolate cherries and romantic stars in her eyes. They go very well together .Anne
  1. Date: 5/27/2014 11:02:00 PM

    and smitten with her moist entwine, he savoured like the red, red wine, as passion engulfed the post, she was the surely most, till oblivion unwinds.... and he gave up his ghost, and a sympathetic mine, chocolate covered cherries are the host:} Don re Debbie Duncan "chocolate covered cherries"
  1. Date: 5/26/2014 9:50:00 PM

    very romantic AND sensuous. I like the imagery of the cherries and the blue skies, Blue in the skies is for happiness!!
  1. Date: 5/25/2014 5:12:00 PM

    Loved the development, and romanticism of it all. Always glad to hear from you.
  1. Date: 5/24/2014 4:35:00 AM

    Hi Debbie! This is so lovely and romantic, and with a tinge of sensuality as well. Much enjoyed:) // paul
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