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Chocolate Covered Cherries

Under those wild blue skies.
Her favorite fruit was chocolate 
covered cherries.

As the skies fell somewhere in time.
She drifted down from the clouds. 
To be dropped into his arms alone. 

He always loved the way the juice  
dripped off her plump red lips .
As he caught the drips on his tongue. 

Capturing some unknown secrets.
As he licked her juicy red lips .
She felt the thrust of his lust in her.

He so loved that childlike wonder in her.
As he looked into her dreamy eyes.
The stars made love to the universe.

As the skies of blue drift over time.
The night stars formed a mystery.
They were full of love, beauty, and lies.



9/30/ 2013

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  1. Date: 1/17/2015 9:09:00 AM

    Hoping this holiday season's conclusion finds you well and busy. The fact that you are here somewhat less often can be considered a good sign in a way. You probably have some good things happening. We all hope so.
  1. Date: 1/2/2015 8:34:00 AM

    Hey Debbie, a wonderfully happy healthy new year to you!! Lots of love too, that won't be a product of 'lies' and fallacies! Chocalate covered cherries, a favorite of my sister in law.:0 I'm not sure if her husband would lick the syrup off of her lips though. A romantic write; enjoy the "stars formed a mystery", makes me think of the constellations, but even more of their individual 'mysteries'. Wishing you also that your muse will always remain a close companion. Keep well, Mikki :)
  1. Date: 12/30/2014 2:34:00 PM

    - Happy New Year, dear Debbie !!!- huggs Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/30/2014 10:02:00 AM

    When I was a kid chocolate covered cherries were a rage. I can imagine the mystery you talk about in connection. Good stuff. Love, daver
  1. Date: 12/28/2014 8:08:00 PM

    I missed wishing you a merry christmas, so we will have to settle with, "HAPPY NEW YEAR!!" In any case, my best wishes to you. I hope you are well. I know that life sometimes takes over and inhibits the creative urge and voice inside our head and heart. That is not a bad thing. Based on all of your work I have read, I think that the people in your life are blessed. Keep up all the good things you do for us all. With fondness.
  1. Date: 12/21/2014 6:14:00 AM

    Debbie this is a positive jewel of a poem, makes one feel tranquil just reading it. Merry Christmas .Anne
  1. Date: 12/17/2014 7:38:00 AM

    - Dear Debbie, I will bring you beautiful wishes for Christmas - I hope you will get a lovely time with your family and friends - Miss you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/24/2014 3:26:00 AM

    - I check your poems from time to time, Debbie - Miss new poem from you :) - thanks for your lovely visit and comments on my poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/23/2014 8:37:00 AM

    By the way, fairway doesn't have cherries of the sour kind. But they do have California apricots. The tartness is pleasing. I like the idea of exotic eating.
  1. Date: 11/23/2014 8:34:00 AM

    Debbie, yes I have not been here much myself. However, it is great to hear from you. We have very busy lives on the short stint of existence. If I was able to make you laugh, that is wonderful. I always loved reading your work. I will try to post more here. I hope you are well. My best wishes and thoughts are with you.
  1. Date: 11/18/2014 10:48:00 PM

    Food is so sensuous like this poem, Debbie. I noticed the twist at the end. The poem has a sense of such fantasy *(fairy tale essence) that It is easy to imagine it is a lie in the end. i really liked this and glad to see you back.
  1. Date: 10/14/2014 3:02:00 PM

    - Debbie, just want to say that it's nice to see you :) - All the best to you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/19/2014 7:26:00 AM

    Debbie, I have been away for a while--not prison, but my head has been dealing with life and work related matters. However, you have a glorious talent. I like cherries and chocolate both. Someone recently told me that Fairway Markets has dried sour cherries so I am going to try them. I'll let you know what I think. Anyway, you are the romantic poet of this site. I hope you are well.
  1. Date: 7/28/2014 6:02:00 PM

    in the morning the sun arose, and filled the morning skies... still love it babe...xox
  1. Date: 7/28/2014 6:01:00 PM

    Passionate work that you have penned..Reads like a great love but built on unsure foundation..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
  1. Date: 6/19/2014 11:44:00 PM

    Yes, you have not posted a new one, but this one is getting still a lot of look sees!!! Hope your next one is as good!
  1. Date: 6/15/2014 7:50:00 AM

    beautiful indeed
  1. Date: 6/15/2014 3:26:00 AM

    Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
  1. Date: 6/14/2014 8:01:00 PM

    A clever and sensuous write..well done Debbie. Hugs
  1. Date: 6/11/2014 8:37:00 AM

    A great poem with excellent imagery.
  1. Date: 6/11/2014 7:31:00 AM

    Sexy, sad, delicious and mysterious. Outstanding piece!
  1. Date: 6/9/2014 11:00:00 AM

    Oh this is so good,,i may be a month late seeing this,,,but the impact still is so inspiring,, i know i have just read it...
  1. Date: 6/8/2014 7:55:00 PM

    So beautifully sensuous and cleverly written - love the twist at the end - very crafty! I really enjoyed reading this while eating chocolate covered cherries:-)
  1. Date: 6/8/2014 7:13:00 PM

    Hello Debbie, What an intoxicating poem, love the Chocolate Covered Cherries drips.. The imagery's superb and the ending holds up brilliantly, romanticly delicious. Linda
  1. Date: 6/3/2014 7:39:00 PM

    Romantic work with a twist of trouble in the last line. Good show! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
  1. Date: 6/3/2014 6:19:00 PM

    Wonderful write Debbie you have written here. I have never heard of chocolate cherries but they sound delicious...all the best, my friend....peter
  1. Date: 6/3/2014 4:11:00 PM

    Holy smokes! Great write Deb, not only because of the very sensual metaphor, but because growing up, chocolate covered cherries were my favorite candy--got a box every year for Christmas. Can't eat em anymore--too rich, the candy that is lol Great ending, too, darling...xxx...:)
  1. Date: 5/29/2014 6:56:00 AM

    Romantic, sensual, and told with beautiful images.
  1. Date: 5/28/2014 9:16:00 PM

    Tell me lies, tell me sweet little lies. Love is a surrender to what can fulfill the heart. Hoping that somehow in the end it will not part. The gambler knows the odds are what they are. And the hopelessly romantic always wish upon a star. Hi Debbie, nice to have you visit. Peace. :)
  1. Date: 5/28/2014 5:56:00 PM

    Hi there! You do have a way with words and images. Thank-you for your comment. A sad ending here. A white lie is OK I think, but not the kind you are talking about. How does love and passion go astray? It happens quite often--even to those with the best intentions at the onset. Always a pleasure to hear from you--I have been very busy, but I have a fond feeling for the talent you have--and that is no lie. You have a dreamy way of telling a story. CIAO for now.
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