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ZOOMING THE DREAM

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ZOOMING THE DREAM

ZOOMING THE DREAM

A rich tomorrow and future We believe we are destined to be one To savor the rest of our life Look up to stride, let the density of our midst live The orchids and the dragon fruits will bloom Lively, profusely, poetically They will glisten in the evening and in the morning To chide and smile for a lovely couple. Be positive and be objective We perceive a life not so perfect but happy Devoid of too many material things but full of faith. Every morning we will greet the sun In that lively path, by the sand dunes Dreamily but feet on the ground Take my hand, our back past behind, Our eyes steadily on to the time to come. What a lovely cut trunk of a tree by the shore Interestingly shaped by the passage of time It was meant for us to enjoy We sat dreamily on it, zooming our dreams Beyond the sea, beyond the horizon.
Dalila Agtani 12/26/11 Entered in a contest Sponsored by Matt Caliri Contest Name: Anything

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  1. Date: 1/31/2012 11:37:00 PM
    this is so cool!! Zooming the dream.You certainly showed it with this vivid poem, Dalila.

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 8:04:00 AM
    I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us Dalila. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 10:44:00 PM
    this is beautiful writing..love,Deb

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 7:57:00 PM
    Smile ˜ In my dreams I have seen, rings of smoke through the trees, and my spirit is crying for leaving ˜ May all your beauties dreams of happiness and love forever come to be, eternally * Very beautiful painting dear Dalila * Merry Christmas to You * My love always, John!:) ˜