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Zombies Attack

Going on a midnight trip at the mountain, Together with my friends and classmates, While resting on an old deserted cabin, Everyone is in shock for what happened next. We heard nasty sounds from afar, Oh my! Zombies are everywhere Darkest night without any visible star, They are walking and looking at us, very near. Panicked and survival are in our bones, Why zombies still exist in this new world? Faces looks horrible, walking in slow motions, Ready get set…….runs fast as what I told! They are after us, many of them, hungry for flesh, Calling all saints to save us from this nightmare, Oh what a disastrous trip we have turned into a mess, From now on, we promise no one will go up there. October 18, 2013 Maria Paz Samelo For Leonora's Halloween Contest 2nd Place Winner

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Date: 11/23/2013 4:54:00 AM
scary spine chiller Maria congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:47:00 AM
Hi sweetie love this one,congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:35:00 PM
Maria, Congratulations on your win. Take care ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:51:00 PM
I'm happy that you could run faster than the Zombies. Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:40:00 PM
I sure do remember this one. Good to see it on the winners list. Congrats, Maria.
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Date: 11/20/2013 4:55:00 PM
Maria, . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love
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Date: 11/20/2013 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Maria
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:12:00 AM
- Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem Maria !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations my very dear friend Maria on your super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/19/2013 7:43:00 AM
Hmnnn.. just peeking;)))). Love this one my dearest friend Maria. Thank you so much in advance! Have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/19/2013 2:25:00 AM
I enjoyed your zombie story, sweetie. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 10/18/2013 10:48:00 PM
chilling piece so eerie and well structured, paz... natakot ako!... this is a halloween pow-wow, complete with the thrills... wonderful show of talent... come visit my page..:) huggs
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Date: 10/18/2013 12:58:00 PM
- First: Thanks for the fav. on my "tear" poem - a great honor! --- I am glad that Zombies are just fantasy .... Imagine if we had rotting humanoid creatures around us ..... - Very well written, Maria! (I have posted one too for this contest) - Good luck in the contest! - Wish you a beautiful weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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