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Your unique birthday gift

Your walk, your talk, the magnetism 
The thoughts of you still make me smile 
Your smile, still etched in my mind
Everything still there 
Memories we shared 
I still miss you 
Still wonder 

We had a common love for music 
Pleasure of sharing them with you 
Our favorite songs still played 
The tears trickle at times
Feelings has changed 
No longer sad
Happy thoughts

My birthday’s significance changed 
You took your final breath that day
It happened so suddenly
Would not alter a thing
A last smile not shared 
We never kissed

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  1. Date: 10/7/2010 9:10:00 PM
    Congratulatins, Wilma. How did I miss this one? It makes me curious to know who this wonderful person was! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/6/2010 11:51:00 AM
    wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 9:11:00 PM
    A beautiful write. many congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 5:40:00 PM
    Congratulations Wilma on your worthy poem's placwe in the top ten. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 12:28:00 PM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Wilma

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 11:46:00 AM
    Congratulations Wilma on your win in Linda-Marie's contest " A Journey Back In Time". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 9:26:00 AM
    Congrats Wilma on your success in my Nonet contest with this excellent entry... appreciate your constant support always with luv...

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 11:48:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like it was a magical relationship...Sara

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 11:52:00 AM
    Wonderful trip Nonet Wilma >> James

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 4:18:00 AM
    Love will always prevail my dear Wilma, I am living walking proof of falling and fallng again and again and yet still here I stand... Enjoyed your work as I always do my love...Luv Michael (Mr.F.)lol

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 7:49:00 PM
    I can only imagine how distraught you were, Wilma. But love still lives and time seems to heal our pain...Love, always, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 5:08:00 PM
    Althought your "tears trickle at times," at least you have some memories that make you smile, Wilma. This is a terrific poem that really moved me.

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 3:22:00 PM
    Here's an "S" for your excellent nonet. Thanx Sweet I know I'm not alone any more becauce you love me:-) I have a time machine.

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 2:27:00 PM
    You share some great memories of this dear friend, Wilma. How sad that this friend died on your birthday. I had a friend like this; he died on Christmas 2005. There was pain for a long time, but I can look back and smile remembering the good times now too. This one goes to my favorites, Wilma. Thanks so much for sharing it! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 11:16:00 AM
    Very nicely written piece - well done

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 11:11:00 AM
    Wow what a wonderful series of nonets you have here, Wilma!! This has to place high-- really enjoyed this one ^_^ & HAHA you are soo right reaching me here better than email, lol let me go check it now...;)