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Your life is not within your hands

Its all within your mind

You are a thinking centre

Who's creating all your plans

Sculpt your future better

What you focus on is real

Push forward all creative thoughts

And then see how you feel

Feeling great is the key

To open all the doors

A little bit of discipline

Will wash away your flaws

For whom ever has determination

You will gain the skill

And change your thoughts

From bad to good

With your very will

Its not an easy task I know

When you are full of grief

It requires power

For you to have belief

All you see in life today

Was created from a thought

From this very poem you're reading now

To everything you've bought

You can think of happiness now

Remember its you who has the power

Control your life, by your thoughts and your feelings

Really this life has a whole new meaning

Hold onto this and don't despair

Amazing thoughts are in the air

When you're in the zone of positive thinking

Your dreams will all come true

You know , life is really a ball

When you know, that you know

That you really know


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  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:45:00 PM
    Very wise words and good thought, good write..thanks on Everyday..Danny

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 8:29:00 AM
    This lifted my spirits today and made me stop and take a look at myself and my future.Thank you.Hope all is well.

  1. Date: 4/3/2010 9:12:00 PM
    Part 2 Whether we are alone or we are with someone Life is what we make it and we all have that choice to choose happiness over sadness and being positive or negative and my choice has always been to remain positive no matter what the circumstances are as long as I can remain happy, Have a wonderful Easter :)

  1. Date: 4/3/2010 9:12:00 PM
    Part 1 Simone we have but one life to live and not enough time to go around for a second time around so we need to stay focused on the positive things that makes our lives worth every moment of living.

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 11:00:00 AM
    The mind, a tightrope, a question of balance, life, maintaining that balance, great write good read Daniel

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 6:49:00 AM
    I see you are marketing everywhere, and your ware is good ... each poem is weapon against despair. But in this one the philosophy is more layered and more richly profound. One love

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 11:26:00 AM
    Interesting and informative write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 5:22:00 AM
    Exellent write Simone - I like what you have to say - Thanks for sharing such wise words Simone - Fabulous up lifting share -:)

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 8:24:00 PM
    Beauty with brilliancy reflects in every line of your wonderful poem my friend. Great write and many thanks for your precious comments on My faith. I am writing a new series Vasava based on the story of a beautiful dancer and singer. Hope you would like it. Yes a small over sight error in the title of your beautiful poem. Please check and correct it Love and best wishes.....Ravindra... Simone

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 1:42:00 PM
    Beautiful write, Simone....listen, thanks for reaching out to Jimmy..could not find you on I left you an invite. Maybe that way you'll be able to find his page....Thnx. ..Peace, love,Audrey

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 4:27:00 PM
    Thought provoking! light & Love

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 3:30:00 PM
    The poetess and her wisdom writes, are a joy to read this Monday night >> James

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 1:22:00 PM
    Great poem, Simone!...reminds me of Maxwell Maltz's "Psycho-Cybernetics' (I read his book at least once a year) - Tim

  1. Date: 3/19/2010 12:26:00 PM
    Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Simone. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/19/2010 5:59:00 AM
    I believe in the power of positive thinking - Thanks for sharing such an inspirational write Simone -:)