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Young Fool -To My Father

YOUNG FOOL. Weren’t you the silly and stubborn young man who came to the land of the Free and home of the Brave to work for free, starve and get no sleep? How dare you change paradise for this? Once the night fell you got on a tiny boat with a thousand others breaking your mother’s heart and making the toughest man on earth cry, your father. Oh you silly young man... smart, handsome, talented, and humble of only 23 decided to risk it all. You had it better than most back home, yet you needed more. You needed to set foot on the land of “Once upon a time.” Days went by, weeks and maybe months, desperation came closer and the toughest broke down, the braves returned back home to make it there as if it was meant to be like that and the fool like you continued. Even though everything seemed to be endless, you, I guess, you trusted God or were too blind folded by your desires that you didn’t back up. Tierra! (Land!) Was screamed in desperation as a sign of relieve. Tierra! Columbus and his men would’ve been ashamed of their cry announcing that they had reached land if they would’ve heard you and your companions. OH, you silly old man, still don’t own a home. Yet, feel that you have accomplished all. Like a sleepy baby you got through the days. You made it through with hands that had a mind of their own, fixing things, painting, and doing things that still amaze us all. But you, you didn’t come here for the home, the car of the year, or the Bling Bling but for the future of two little girls. Foolishness, ignorance and desire taught you to be the best man to walk the surface of the earth, to be tough, to be brave like a soldier and to stay humble all the way! I love you Dad.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/13/2012 7:12:00 AM
I appreciate poems that really show emotion, this does. Congratulations on being featured by Poetry Soup this week...............S.Ronthorpe.
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Date: 2/13/2012 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Yesica. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2011 3:31:00 PM
I like your prose style, short, yet revealing. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/23/2011 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Yesica. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Yesica
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Date: 11/21/2011 3:17:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute!
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Date: 5/14/2011 5:23:00 PM
What an expressions, very raging and powerful thoughts, yesica
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Date: 5/13/2011 5:11:00 PM
very interesting ,,, and clever... thanks for sharing... take care,..p.d
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