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You Went Away

Ever since you went away my world has become dark and grey i wish that you would come back to me and save me from certain insanity. IT hurt so much that we are apart all i have now is your memory locked away in my heart come back oh please come back to me i promise i'll love you till eternity. MY tears were the rain that fell today it's been falling ever since you walk away my days are so lonely the nights are so long please tell where did i go wrong? Now there is a voind in my heart to fill but i don't think it ever will cause there is no other who compares to you for me no other will ever do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/3/2013 9:36:00 AM
Sorry bout your loss, but seriously, Is this published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Or enter another one of your poems... they all seem really fantastic and creative! Wish you the best with your poetry no matter what you decide!
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