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You Trap Us Inside Your Jars

After several weeks of caresses You seduce me to lock my soul inside a jar I’m glad and sad I’m not the only one Glad that I’m not the only stupid Sad that women make mistakes repeated You classify us by our characteristics Treat us emotionally sadistic You make us feel pathetic You are to rate us and decide who’ll be retired To be dumped and spitted After your several testing phases How many jars been decorating your shelf? How can we escape from you and temptation towards ourselves? (24/01/2012)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/12/2013 11:59:00 PM
I'm sure there are many that can relate to this... sad to say there will always be those kind of people who view partners as prisoner and people as things. You've expressed your passion and anger very well in this. Well done!
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Date: 4/29/2012 4:43:00 PM
So there are these unrighteousness men who steal virtue and use them as selfish trophies. Your articulation is well enjoyed through inspiration.
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! It's so fun to see who's on the winner's list once it's over. Glad to see your name there Dinda! Nice write - the ending really makes you feel like you're one of those women trapped there, wondering if they'll ever get out.
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:24:00 AM
Congratulations Dinda x
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Date: 1/29/2012 8:28:00 PM
congrats indeed for you deserving win Dinda. emotive passionate piece!
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Date: 1/29/2012 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:13:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. This is a fascinating write.
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Date: 1/28/2012 7:24:00 PM
Good one from you , Dinda, and a philosophical one at that! the guy sounds like a hoarder of captured hearts!! congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:47:00 PM
Dinda congrats on your win,..David
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:25:00 PM
A nice treatment of a sad subject. Enjoyed the read Dinda Congratulations
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:17:00 PM
congrats Dinda on a splendid win for this awesome entry about jars theme.. great title too..luv..
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Date: 1/25/2012 5:58:00 PM
Sad to say I maybe think you speak from experience little one. Can't imagine anyone abusing your sweet self. Put on some armor!
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Date: 1/24/2012 8:36:00 AM
The men that do that know what to look for in a woman so that they can abuse them emotionally, mentally, and physically even murder..Great topic chosen.Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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