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You Took From Me

Seven years I could not laugh You took a lot away from me You took my happiness Replaced it with your sappyness Took my outgoing personality Replaced it with your low mentality Took my helpful ways Gave me no praise Took my spunkiness Made me think I couldn't bounce back Took my spirit away Left me in dismay Worse yet, you took my love from above Threw it away like a piece of trash I almost crashed Treated me as a prized posession Left me in a deep depression One day I saw the light Now you had a fight My old spirit was coming back That made you kind of wack The light around me is growing bright That kind of left you in fright Cause you were losing sight Of the best love that crashed in flight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 1:48:00 PM
Very good, now expand on that and always remember this....YOU are in control, and give that to no one...at any expense. Great write.
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Letitia Alvarez
Date: 4/9/2014 9:26:00 PM
So much has happened since then. I finally dumped him. Life is great!

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