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You Make Me Feel Like a Sunset

You make me feel like a Summer's sunset on a beach: Watching the bight rays stretch Out across the waves, Saying one last golden goodbye to the world Before it goes to sleep; allowing The stars and moon to take its place in the Evening sky, as they sparkle across The water like thousands of dancing snowflakes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/22/2012 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 11:04:00 AM
This is a beautiful romantic poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:12:00 AM
Sweet and lovely poem Ernest....well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/23/2012 12:24:00 AM
Very pretty image of sunsets and starry skies- beautiful, thank you for sharing, bren
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