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You laying in the dunes with me

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You laying in the dunes with me

The sun already traversed the sky,
arms linked, soul stepping into the tide,
the sun kissed your skin,
and reminded me why once you made me shy.
The mouth of time it open’eth wide,
and our love blossomed to kin.

Quietness of the soul,
as the senses indulge,
in the laspe of the sea,
the stars pierce vast coal,
the happenings of next I will not divulge,
you laying in the dunes with me.

Copyright © Lance Lawlor

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  1. Date: 11/9/2009 10:35:00 PM
    what if a black hole was a higher form of light... ... in some ways, I believe this to be true, not knowing why, when or who I might have seen, read or heard such a thing through, but yes... if this can be, then it must be true, that we're living inside the black hole. or did I just sound like a moroon? ... before we could see, we only saw blue and before we could see ultra, it was only violets hue... instruments advance, we and our intelligence grow.... I adore to read you!

  1. Date: 11/9/2009 10:23:00 PM
    ... thank you! for the black hole comment... I'm not a scientist of any kind or even a good part time hobbyist... but what you wrote sounds good to me :) Please email me (soup mail) and explain to your hearts content... would love to hear more. :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2009 9:46:00 PM
    ... ps... I got some dune boots... when we leavin'? ;)

  1. Date: 11/7/2009 9:45:00 PM
    The sun across sky, arms linked in love and souls together akin from above, ken, Smiles engage eye to eye and the quiet of our Souls indulge, light shines though the galactic bulge... and we're here again, my friend.

  1. Date: 11/1/2009 6:49:00 AM
    Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Lance. Love, Carol