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You In Mine

Your reflection is on the side of my heart...
I only see it when I'm alone and in the dark...

At times I can't breathe and I stretch for some air...
Gasping and swallowing fear and endless despair...

Through a past of drowning outside of discolored reality...
To falling into the cracks of hope and sense ability....

That reflection still stands the test of time...
For there is always a piece of you in mine...

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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:39:00 PM
    ha ha..Love the Santa Michael, ... comemnt... pd

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:15:00 PM
    I'm cooking meat for my restaurant tomorrow morning... i have to take care of it... I'm not tired...i think...I'm gonna pull 24 hour on the JK....i'm headed home in an hour...xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:23:00 AM
    Awww, the last stanza really knocked me out, Michael. A very good way to put on my feeling rite now :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Michael. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 6:23:00 PM
    Soup mail XXOO

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 2:06:00 PM
    Sad but beautiful...

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 10:09:00 PM
    Michael, everything about your poem, is heaven-sent. I do not know how you do it,.. You are like Mr. Robert H.. you never seem to run out of imagery and poet lines. your poem is a darling piece of work, heartfelt on the last line... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 11:02:00 AM
    A lovely gem, embracing all that makes you, you! Especially love the ending MJF, hope you are enjoying your day on the Golf course ;) love CTH

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:53:00 PM
    Micheal; this really touches the heart. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:20:00 AM
    wonderful Michael, such elegants...

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 8:00:00 AM
    wow..very touching Mike..luv it...beautiful..luv it <3<3<3 :)) SK

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 12:43:00 AM
    So touching and deep. Loved it.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:42:00 PM
    Beautiful poem here Michael!Enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 4:39:00 PM
    Wow, what a fascinating and powerful poem this is my friend! I am in awe with this incredible nature of this write! I really enjoyed your intriguing and soulful poem Michael! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 9/25/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Russell your comments are the cool drink at the end of my day. MJF
  1. Date: 9/25/2012 4:39:00 PM
    Michael,your on the top of the world this magnificent piece.An outstanding,awesome couplet that both me and Anne just loved to bits!Having a bit trouble with the net here at Mediterranean this evening.Bouncing on and off the Soup,lol!Thanks again for your wonderful comments,brother

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 9/25/2012 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Arild, your compliments feeds the soul.
  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:39:00 PM
    So beautiful written Michael!! oxox Anne-Lise :)

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 9/25/2012 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise!! Your words are too kind. Now give that guy next to you a big hug from me for that amazing dedication that floored me. xoxo Michael
  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:36:00 PM
    Simply delightful Michael :)

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 9/25/2012 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks James. Coming from you that means a lot. MJF