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You Can Never Be Here

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You Can Never Be Here

The world ends inside me as I realize you can never be here
And darkness shreds inside of me, curling and twisting
The absence is abhorrent - positively criminal
Emerging in me is the aftermath of all disasters obliterating
And there, to you, I must go

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  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:18:00 PM
    love your emotion in your poems tiouched lovly write xx davidscott

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 12:54:00 AM
    Deep write..separation brings with it its own anxieties and desperation...the need for togetherness outweighs all other thoughts...well penned Laura!

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 3:36:00 PM
    wow, this is so profound, and leaves the mind wide open, to lots of imagery, intesting poem, like this...