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You Came Like the Rain

The dead leaves were sparkled; the splash of rain colored with life. My barren heart found an immigrant's Love, a sea of desire ruffled with inspiration. My hands reached for eternity years of isolation was broken. Life's meaning was fulfilled. You came like the Rain with utmost joy I welcomed You showered you with all my truism. But desert is a place for cactus, love bleeds in my heart. Heathen Heart and Heathen soul they said, 'It was a storm'... Redfiery @ 2012,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/4/2016 8:01:00 AM
Simply beautiful writing and a great free verse poem it is my friend. A7
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:05:00 AM
Another great example of turning sorrow into beauty. I would Love to make you happy and then read what you write.
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:02:00 PM
Good metaphor here! I have a number of Cacti myself. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/6/2012 7:03:00 AM
You are really coming into your own like the symphony when they hit the heart string note.
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Date: 5/25/2012 12:21:00 PM
Red, passing storm or not, the words just flow wonderfully, I like it a lot..love David
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Date: 4/29/2012 2:03:00 PM
Smile ˜ I have been searching for You, my sweet beautiful lady * Smashing the lamp unto the floor; come here, my beautiful luv ˜ Always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 4/23/2012 11:35:00 AM
hmmm....good or bad storm, I can't decide?? Like your metaphors ....enjoyed !!
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:47:00 PM
I enjoyed our inspiratinal love poem. Great reading it tonight.
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:52:00 PM
I loved reading your poem today! Good job!
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