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I should have written to you a Sedoka, For you are gracious and more than a mediocre, Many do not know you as a shining star, As their minds are clouded and their thoughts far, ‘one man’s meat is another man’s poison’ to me you are a gem from the north horizon, Your imperfection makes you modest and real, Different from hypocrisy which gives a raw deal, If I’ve met you in your prime at a young age, I would have wasted no time to write a new page, Proposal that would have seen us at the altar, Which would have made our present state better, Love and you will be loved-this is not always true, Tears have flowed from your eyes like the morning dew, Which is due to wickedness of men that brings pain, But I’m prepared to ease your pain and walk your lane. DATE:1

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Date: 1/3/2015 10:05:00 AM
Very touching write and tribute. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/21/2014 12:32:00 PM
Great tribute, congratulations!
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Date: 11/20/2014 5:22:00 AM
What a blessed tribute to our gal, Catie! Your heart has unending kindness! I pray that you are doing well in all of your life's journeys!
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Date: 11/19/2014 4:26:00 PM
Olusegun -- A most wonderful write and tribute here to Catie!! Congratulations on your win!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 11/19/2014 1:44:00 PM
A very lovely supporting poem. Congratulations on your win. Olusegun
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Date: 11/19/2014 3:45:00 AM
A sweet and deep piece to uplift a frustrated soul..... Congrats for your WIN Olusegun! ;-)
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Date: 11/18/2014 2:04:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/11/2014 5:36:00 PM
This poem does flow like Jan stated, Very nice job Olusegun!
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Date: 11/11/2014 3:38:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic..I enjoyed reading this one..If I’ve met you in your prime at a young age, I would have wasted no time to write a new page, Proposal that would have seen us at the altar, As one writer put it "Come and grow old with me the best of life is yet to be"..Sara
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Date: 11/11/2014 2:53:00 PM
oh what a beautiful tender write - I loved the rhyme and the flow of the poem:-) Hugs Jan xx
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