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Every time I start to write a poem, 
My thoughts think of you.
Of your eyes when you look at me, 
Of your voice when you talk to me.
I can't get you out of my head,
Not even at night,
When I go to bed.
It's frustrating,
I'm always debating.
Are my feelings for you right?
I feel like a little kid,
But my heart wants to fight.
I ask myself so many questions,
You give me so few answers.
My mind goes crazy, 
My thoughts hazy.
I can't keep you off my mind,
A love like that,
Was hard to find

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  1. Date: 4/24/2013 2:43:00 PM
    I can see how the thoughts tear your mind here. It takes talent to write like that. And yes, I have had many people tell me that I am romantic. They only say that about my writing, so I don't know if my pen comes across as more romantic than my person. I have seen lots of girls looking at me though. Maybe they just did not have the nerve to tell me.

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 4:41:00 AM
    Awesome write!!!! Enjoyed reading this morning..please continue to post more.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning poem...Donna

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 5:49:00 PM
    Nicely written.

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 5:38:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:41:00 AM
    Congrats, Danielle. Excellent. Nice going. Happy Easter. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:11:00 PM
    Danielle, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:37:00 AM
    Danielle, its seems to me as if you were bitten by the love bug. Good love is always hard to find. *Skat

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 2:36:00 PM
    Danielle, you write well - good poem: "You"! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)