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YOU

YOU

Your 
Uncaring eyes
Push me 
Repulsively 
Braise me down to a pit of abysmal. 
Your balance ego 
Keeps me on the void
Painted walls
While I, 
Twitch
Bitter 
Words 
Of yuck
Behind your back.

~SKAT~

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  1. Date: 8/19/2015 4:42:00 PM
    I know all about uncaring eyes...But the good thing is that there are always caring eyes out there...

  1. Date: 6/3/2015 8:46:00 AM
    My friend Skat, hopefully this situation has run its course. Just remember, that sometimes we pick our grapes too soon and end up with bad wine. "Their will be no wine before it's time." True love will find you. Always Ken

  1. Date: 5/22/2015 11:06:00 AM
    Very expressive and deep-felt words, Skat! I hope since then the situation has been solved, preferably by moving on and away! hugs // paul

  1. Date: 5/13/2015 12:14:00 AM
    Thank you SKAT

  1. Date: 4/30/2015 1:23:00 PM
    Interesting.

  1. Date: 1/25/2015 6:02:00 PM
    What can you do about you. Peace. :) Hope you've had a nice weekend SKAT.

  1. Date: 8/29/2014 4:51:00 PM
    This is great!

  1. Date: 5/17/2014 11:26:00 PM
    Very well done...... Gina

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 3:29:00 AM
    Me you stew chew Bleeding exorcised Beautiful blue Red cauterised Tomorrow new Banished why’s Kaleidoscopic view Open wide eyes Me you hue mues

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 3:09:00 AM
    Glorious Dear friend...You are not only a good poet but also a great person . I love you so much ... Best wishes from India forever...

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 7:28:00 AM
    I know a few of your yous!...I like this poem very much, stirred quite a few bitter memories, and isn't that the aim of a poet, to stir emotions, good or bad?! Well done SKAT, Robert xoxoxo

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 3:13:00 AM
    Its so nice of Skat. Like it <3

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 9:38:00 PM
    Straight to the point... I like I like

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 3:10:00 AM
    DEEP !

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 10:29:00 AM
    † 'You,' Yes And I Do Not Know, If Anyone Has Ever Told 'You,' How Very Beautiful 'You Are;' I Am Sure A Million Times But, I Just Wanted To Remind, 'You.' ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 4:32:00 AM
    what a disgusting man here.. a great attitude, hope she leaves soon... Skaatt, love your words, i just havent got much time lately and some more, no computer :( thankfully i have my android to keep up with ur strong words (kiss and hug)

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Very nice. I love your use of words - "braise" "twitch" "bitter"

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Wow this is great. It reminds me of my first love. You wanted to know about me and to be honest I'm just a seventeen year old rebel without a cause who has slot on her mind haha but you're very talented. I love your work.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Very intense poem. Short yet not sweet. Paints the picture well, especially the ending.

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Whoa, so raw and real. I love it. I can almost see the expression on your face as I read this. Great job.

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