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Below is the poem entitled You which was written by poet Rebecca Larkin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Are there to
Brighten my days
And leave me smiling from ear to ear

I wish to be held by you forever
If only you
Knew how I
Felt about

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  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:45:00 PM
    Dear Rebecca, YOUR Versatality in Forms is Remarkable. this is a Perfect Tetractys. The "YOU" in this POEM is very lucky for YOU to put YOUR Heart out for. YOUR line "felt about" could be felt for, or felt with to be 2 syllables.Superb Quill. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:31:00 AM
    Another nice have mastered this form. Very good write...enjoyed!!

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 5:29:00 PM
    Ah! How sweet. :-P I wonder who that one's for....*hmmmmmmm* Joker: ME of course!!!!! Laura: hahaahaha! Indeed! Always, Laura

    Larkin Avatar Rebecca Larkin
    Date: 12/22/2011 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you're such a dork lol :P . . . and yes it is about whom you think it is--what's your point? hahaha
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 12:55:00 PM
    Stopping back to read more of your excellent poetry today Rebecca. Please continue with your writing and share it with us. Don't forget to enter some of the member contests. Love, Carol