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Don’t breath in front of the ash for reminiscence I afraid his dusty come inside your eyes And hurt your nice eyes Don’t puff your cigarette while you smoke In case not the ash come to your face Don’t smell flower that’s someone smell it before That flower is nice if never people smelled Don’t look at the sun it’s too bright I don’t want to see tear go down from your eyes Stare at the moon, its shine look like your eyes Baby never tries to fly, if you flies never go down Baby never tries to cry, if you cry look at the sky If you want to fly I will give you wings If you want to cry I will give u eyes You wanted life, you got my heart You wanted life, you got my love You wanted me, you got my soul

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Date: 6/4/2013 4:12:00 AM
I too, love the last three lines most but the whole poem is lovely. To love and to be loved is what life is all about. God Bless. Dave.
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Date: 6/5/2009 6:52:00 AM
Thrilling.
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Date: 6/3/2009 6:52:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/29/2009 6:54:00 PM
Welcome the soup! Lovely poem. Loved the last three lines. -Alley
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Date: 5/29/2009 6:19:00 AM
wonderful especially the ending..such tenderness Light & Love
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Date: 5/29/2009 5:31:00 AM
Interesting piece, with lovely imageries. I love the last line… the comparison. You are such a great poet. Keep your poetry pens dancing to the drum beat of your dreams… great you! Leke Interesting piece with lovely imageries
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