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Yin & Yang ( a Love Letter )

she's absolut i'm hennessy i'm rush hour traffic in L.A. she's a small town in Tennessee she's left handed i think i'm always right i love the way she will compromise i never give in without a fight hard/soft she's satin sheets i'm the body wrapped within together were complete without her i feel without a friend i'm lust she's desire she's my redemption my salvation from the fire and while were not exactly opposites she compliments me beautifully picking me up when i fall and standing by me dutifully

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Date: 4/30/2009 8:22:00 AM
A talented write Brian.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/20/2009 8:38:00 PM
Nicely said, how great it is to have someone so special. This is definitely going into my favs dear Brian!
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Date: 4/17/2009 10:27:00 AM
this is really my favorite poem of yours
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:54:00 AM
More WOWS!! great creation...poetry is the most UNDERREATED theraphy!! Hugs, Robin Maughan
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Date: 4/16/2009 8:43:00 PM
Well done bro. I really do like this one. You are gonna make me work if you keep writing like this. Very proud. You got the glow, sho-nuff.
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Date: 4/16/2009 6:01:00 PM
amazing, just absolutly beautiful!
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Date: 4/16/2009 3:49:00 PM
Love this! Like e.e.cummings your poetic use of small letters capitalizes the strength and intent of the words. Thanks
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Date: 4/16/2009 2:52:00 PM
wonderful -charma
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Date: 4/16/2009 2:01:00 PM
You've got soup mail.
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Date: 4/16/2009 1:48:00 PM
There is much truth in "opposites attract," Brian. People with whom you share nearly everything in common can be good friends. For me, I sense more chemistry with someone who is uniquely true to themselves, even if I disagree with their views. Sparks some great debate! Love the message in this poem, Brian!
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