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Yesterday Faces: Ve Day 2008

A farewell never passed Our valediction lost to the winds A lifetime of rage and anguish Flowing hotly upon the detriment And breaching. Though not without conflict It is under the shadow of war Within these shattered burnt ruins Remains the anguish Of sixty three years A recollection that seeps into the void Of my spirit Haunting my sleep…

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Date: 7/12/2008 5:27:00 AM
An important part of our heritage and history. Let's hope the ACLU doesn't have this day banned so it doesn't offend the nazis. You still write with a patriotic flair. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 7/8/2008 6:40:00 PM
Poem full of passion. We war even in our sleep. Great write.
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Date: 7/8/2008 4:13:00 AM
A very well written poem, wrought with anguish and emotion. So much of our past seeps into dreams...bless you my dear, Love Kristin
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Date: 7/7/2008 8:40:00 AM
I believe the shadow of war haunts us all. Perhaps some more than others, for personal reasons. This is a haunting piece of work in itself, with great depth of emotion. Your poetry always brilliant, and a true pleasure to read. Love, Shar
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