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Yesterday and Tomorrow On Paper

Washing memories... A square fit in a circle... Just doesn't happen... Forgetting the past... Like running between raindrops... Always getting wet... Writing a future... Jumbled words scattered about... A rhyming life penned...

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Doreen Wright

Date: 8/21/2012 7:35:00 PM

I absolutely love this!! The references and the flow make this a great one.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/1/2012 10:19:00 AM

I love this one!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/24/2012 1:21:00 PM

I love this clever write, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/24/2012 10:05:00 AM

and still more rhymes to come Michael luv.. this is a wonderful expression luv.. the second set I especially luv.. but rainbows are part of who I am too.. hope to catch up with u next week.. it has been a little crazy here.. hope u r enjoying Summer .. we r back at beach this week.. oh.. JG needs so much SUN.. xoxo..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/24/2012 8:51:00 AM

lovely running commentary finely scribbled... you first line caught me at once, michael... greeat work!..:) huggs!

James Peranteau

Date: 7/24/2012 1:46:00 AM

The Senryu is fantastic dear poet ! I was especially in rapture with the second Senryu here Michael; nailed this, dead on ! Have a wonderful week sir...much love, james

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/22/2012 12:11:00 PM

This is quite the special write my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity of this write, just like all of your poetry its very descriptive in nature! Fantastic poem Michael, Great Work!!