Yellow Setting Sun

yellow setting sun end to nice warm winter's day.. gold full moon rises
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/28/2013 10:49:00 PM
nice image in this short haiku....enjoyed reading...
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Date: 1/28/2013 7:43:00 PM
one gold one comes up as the other comes down. NICE!
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Date: 1/28/2013 2:18:00 PM
and with a nice warm winter's day, a beautiful Haiku...
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Date: 1/28/2013 6:39:00 AM
The setting sun is soooo beautful. Nice poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/27/2013 6:27:00 PM
very nice images Sara, thank you for reading "family hair" your life story is interesting. It's funny how people say " oh she looks just like you" when you know the truth of it all . You have a blessed day Sara ;}
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Date: 1/27/2013 1:15:00 PM
I like this HAIKU- Thanks for sharing. It's nice sitting aside watching the earth make precious movements. LEGANDWRITER.
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Date: 1/27/2013 1:48:00 AM
Great Haiku with great image my dear friend, Sara. I am so happy to read it and so much enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 1/26/2013 10:18:00 PM
Lovely, Sara. The sun and moon are both themes that delight me! Hugs
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Date: 1/26/2013 9:50:00 PM
am enjoying this visual beauty Sara .. u painted a glowing picture with these words luv ,, thankxx for prayers and sweet comments to inspire me .. am on slow mend from my health crisis but grateful to read u again .. hope to be on more as health allows ..happy Sunday.
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Date: 1/26/2013 6:23:00 PM
Nice haiku, Sara! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/26/2013 4:43:00 PM
This is another one of your wondrously perfect writes my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing Haiku this evening! You have painted a wonderful image, one that I really enjoyed during this cold winter's day! I can't wait til we have some warmer days coming in the near future, it's been so bitter cold here lately! It has gotten down to the single digits some nights! Your poem is exquisite and very well written Sara, I love it, Great Work!!
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