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Write the End To This Fairy Tale

He didn't see her tears He didn't hear her sigh He couldn't see the longing That was burning in her eye He didn't notice her He didn't seem to care She was slowly giving up Dying in her despair She just didn't know how To make the embers blaze She walked around in gloom Her life an endless maze But then…someone came by A chivalrous kind knight Who saw her real beauty And took note of her plight He tried his best to woo her To fill up the empty space He said, “Look in my eyes See the reflection of your face. You are altogether lovely A goddess from another plane.” She couldn't believe all this Did he think she was insane? But slowly her heart melted She started to tingle inside The joy shone from her face It was hard from love to hide Now she faced a dilemma What was she supposed to do? Leave the one she still loved To grasp a love that’s new? Dear Reader, to this fairy tale We must find a happy end For we have yet to see If the knight is heaven sent There are many simple truths That are woven in this tale But clearest of all is this: Love unurtured is bound to fail. Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/18/2013 10:00:00 PM
ha ha...I love this.. Eileen, I wish the end of my tale, to start with a new beginning. And insane in a good way I will always be.. that is what makes me a Goddess from another planet. thank you for the opportunity, on allowing our own ending thoughts... awesome.. LINDA
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Date: 2/18/2013 8:06:00 PM
Feels kinda like Cinderella ..beautiful
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Date: 2/18/2013 7:09:00 AM
Anything can happen land. I love the way you wrote this poem. Letting the reader decide what could be. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2013 7:11:00 AM
Thanks, my dear! Glad you liked it!

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