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World's Ending

''through clouds of smoke, through acid rain, all you can see, is destruction and pain, bomb shells dropping, endless bullets fly, till no one is left, to see the world die, thanks to humans, we live in fear, and because of them, we can not hear, the crying and mourning, of lost loved ones so dear, so this is how it will end, with us killing them, and them killing us, the human race is hopeless, we've made our own doom, we have made our own hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/10/2010 12:55:00 PM
and once again a powerful mind you have Samantha thank you duncan
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:59:00 PM
well written,thanks!congrats!
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:44:00 PM
Samantha, congrats on your poem being featured this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Samantha. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2010 4:16:00 PM
such a sad state of affairs...yet the world has been ending since it first began...soft smile...becareful not to add to the negative side..write us a verse on the good you see too! Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2010 3:45:00 PM
Different thoughts about the end of the world ...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara
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Date: 3/14/2010 11:51:00 PM
INteresting topic. Congratulations. Ernilando
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Date: 1/29/2010 12:14:00 PM
How true. Revelation chapter 21 is the solution.
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:38:00 AM
Exactly at that climax is when someone SUPREME will interfere. The sky will open, and JESUS will manifest openly to deal with those issues . There is HOPE. Nice poem though cause you are seeing what humans are capable of doing.
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:12:00 AM
Very good sam. Very Very Good!
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