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Wonders of My Life

I can't help but wonder I can't help it but I just have to look back The scar's that I have healed Every picture I have is so random I could cry a river I can't stop the anger within How can I love and hate thee at the same time You were supposed to be my shield but you burnt me You were supposed to be my oxygen but yet you're my carbon dioxide My heart feels like an Ice box You're a part of me You're my strength yet my weakness You're past yet my future You're my enemy yet my family I hate you and i love you at times You break me but yet you make me

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2013 1:37:00 PM

Hi Asiphe,, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2013 5:53:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2013 9:32:00 PM

Asiphe, thank you for the wonderful poem and stunning imagery in my "7 wonders of the world contest." CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for the support. Take Care & Good Night ;-) ~LINDA

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/26/2013 8:35:00 PM

Congratulations!! -Jeremy

Skat A

Date: 4/26/2013 8:22:00 PM

Asiphe, it is nice to see you on a winning list. congrats with your 7 wonder poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 4/26/2013 7:04:00 PM

No better wonders than the ones in your life, excellent poem Asiphe, congratulations

Donna Jones

Date: 4/26/2013 1:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/26/2013 11:37:00 AM

Congrats on your win... and welcome to this happy Family and happy Home~ A.O

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/17/2013 10:45:00 PM

Welcome to the poetry soup, Asiphe . My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to my latest contest... called the “7 wonders” I ENJOY GIVING new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Thanks for your time *LINDA

Skat A

Date: 4/17/2013 8:44:00 PM

Asiphe:-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

Kim Van Breda

Date: 4/17/2013 8:31:00 AM

Well written--and brave revelation. Welcome to P/soup

Asiphe Tomeli
Date: 4/17/2013 4:24:00 PM

Thanx alot Kim for the comment, its a grate pleasure that i found poetry sou