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Wonderful Man

Depressed I was
in the depths of despair.
I nearly gave up,
then you were there.
Wonderful man
you came to my rescue.
I stopped being sad
and started anew.
The happiest I've been 
in a very long time.
Thrilled in just knowing
that you were mine.
Now I hear bells,
what can it mean?
Time to wake up
you're only a dream.

Copyright © Jenny Brewer | Year Posted 2013

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/29/2014 4:53:00 PM JENNY, CONGRATULATIONS, enjoying your winning poem in Isaiah's DREAM paint contest.... hugs...Linda Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2014 3:21:00 PM Sometimes dreams are far better than reality Jenny - this is beautiful a well deserved winner my friend hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/26/2014 2:54:00 PM Hi Jenny, Aww, I was hoping those were wedding bells. What a shame all her happiness was tied only to a dream. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Shawn Munoz Date: 3/28/2014 12:17:00 PM Love this one, just remember patience my dear is a virtue and before you know it your dream love will come true. Login to Reply

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 8/3/2013 8:35:00 PM Nice Jenny, I like this poem and I'd offer the lady (You) in your poem some sound advice...do what the person in my poem "Are You A Dream?" vowed to do and you'll live with him happily ever after -promise. MC Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/1/2013 11:17:00 PM A nice win.. Jenny, ... LOVE ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/30/2013 8:36:00 AM Jenny, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/25/2013 1:27:00 PM Hi Jenny, sadly it was only a dream, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/25/2013 4:51:00 AM Good morning Jenny, wow... I'm happy you got pulled out of that Sucker punched depression. I've seen what it does to peeps. Please know your poem made me happy. .. I to found myself a wonderful man. And hear the bells, only in dreams. .. I think your dreams are telling you that you're finally happy. Have yourself and nice and wonderful day. Always and forever Linda Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/25/2013 4:21:00 AM - Hello new member: Jenny. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply