Woman and Her Vines

They grew all over In the sunlight they progressed The vines became her And she was one with the vines The sunshine brought life to them She held docile vines Growing like weeds onto her She was very free Green and nude she went along Becoming just like the vines She didn’t know much Where the vines came from that day They appeared at once After she fell asleep then In the warm light of the sun It seems that vines love The cute essence of the sun And the heat she has Then they grew on her, beaming Becomes that of her being Now she is attached Firmly planted on the ground With nutrients there Pumping juice through living Earth And the sunshine’s energy Now she loves the vines And she can still write poems She writes on nature Something she now knows about By sunshine is she able
Russell Sivey A repost under a different title. A unique vision!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 3/7/2013 3:08:00 PM
it is a very unique vision. I really enjoyed this one, Russell. Very creative writing.
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Date: 3/7/2013 11:46:00 AM
I am impressed with this work..Very expressive and creative work..I am glad that I chose it today to read..If for a contest, winner for sure in my book..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2013 10:03:00 AM
Well; I know it had to take some imagination to write this poem. I loved it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/6/2013 6:27:00 PM
Hi Russell.love this poem..it is beautiful but also made me smile...have you seen the movie I think its called lil shop of horrors? Where the plant says feed me....I thought about that. Don't know why...just made me smile...this is awesome
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